| "Arigatou Ouji Sama" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Shadow-King [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was funny. i liked it.
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 00:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
BULMA AND CHI CHI ARE DIRTY WHORES AND DON'T DESERVE SUCH WONDERFUL MEN AS VEGETA AND GOKU!!! if vegeta had any sence he'd be making sure that Bulma didn't treat him like that. he could go out and get any woman he wants, same with goku. What's a Sayajin god like him doing with a ditzy vally girl like her anyway?!?!? he should be off with some amazing woman who really appericiates what she's got. I mean, if I had him I'd fuck him once in the morning, once in the afternoon, and 18 times a night!! Let's see if he can stay awake. *evil grin* oh, and for all you flamers, not naming any names ¬_¬ need to re evaluate what your reading. it's called fan fiction, FAN fiction. if that doesn't make it clear enough let me explain it for you; fan fiction is something where the fans write whatever they damn well please and if you don't like it DON'T READ IT!!! and if you do read it, it still doesn't give you any reason to flame. it was your choice not the author's. do they make you read it? NO! so just FUCK OFF and pretend you never read it. On a lighter note, i enjoyed this story very much. though the lemon scene was short (thats constructive critisism; learn it, love it.) It was really cool. write on. The Lovely Aquamarine
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Reviewed By: JuBee On: April 11, 2004 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was awesome, don't listen to those idiots going on about bulma and vegeta. It's anyone's game and you have my compliments!
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 03, 2004 16:29 CST
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Lovely fic! Anyone who flames you, *cough* Laina *cough* dante red devil slayer *cough* should learn to be RESPECTFUL of ANOTHER'S work and opinions. This is a great story! Some people are just mean. *cough* Laina *cough* dante red devil slayer *cough* I'll take some cough medicine! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Laina On: July 02, 2003 23:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Even a ZERO is to good for you and you kinda said not to say this, but what the hell you can't do anything to me. ONLY BULMA AND VEGETA BELONG TOGETHER NOT VEGETA AND SOME WHORE LILY WHICH I THINK IS YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dante red devil slayer On: April 13, 2003 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
well not bad you pervert
but whats wrong with you getting horny whislt writing this but i going to cus my fuckiing brains out till everyone is chrisened perverted horny sick asswipes and you can't stop me haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dante red devil slayer On: April 13, 2003 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
well not bad you pervert
but whats wronng witn you get horny whislt writing this but i going to cus by fuckiing brains out till everyone is chrisened perverted horny sick asswipes and you can't stop me haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Weee! That was VERY well written :) And I completely agree with you.. Bulma is a psychotic bitch from hell.
The lemon was excellent! *applaudes* Raw, carnal sex is always awesome ;)
I REALLY hope you write one for Goku.. everyone protrays him as this innocent little pup... HA..
but ya, I look forward to your next installment.. weeeeeee!!! |
