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| "Forever It Will Stay" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Phsycobratt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 02:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice, please hurry with the next chapter.
| Title: good job
Reviewed By: like-a On: April 25, 2004 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fan fic of yours is really good and i hope you'll finish the whole story sooner since i cant take the suspense anymore...like whats gonna happen next..so i really hope you finish the whole story sooner..
| Reviewed By: Anaymous0 On: April 18, 2004 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really great. Please update soon.
| Title: Interesting start!!
Reviewed By: Julia_Tania [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, we were just browsing through the fanfics and we clicked into yours! You've started off well. We liked how you carried off from the last episode of the Cardcaptor Sakura series--nice and concise and it's always very nice to hear your perception of things. The end also felt a bit like the end of the manga; we see that you mixed it together and you did it quite well. The story itself, it's very nice too. You've led us believe that Syaoran likes Sakura, but then he does... suppose that's the part that didn't really conform with the manga or the anime, but that's not a complaint. You're keeping interesting by making him not confess his feelings (if he has any, whatever they are). Then you have Sakura, years later she's angry at Syaoran. You've mentioned that she cared about him through that scene where she was bringing the homework to him and then connecting it with this anger hints to us what feelings she might have for him. We're thinking that maybe she likes him... we'll see, huh? We think you're making it interesting by keeping us swaying between, does she like him--or does she not? (and vice versa). GRAMMAR/SPELLING: Was reading it really fast, so we didn't find any. The story is fairly original, it's still got the same hate-love relationship, but it's not cliche totally. And lastly, we love the story so far. Keep at it!!
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