| "Apology Accepted" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Shadow_Hitokiri [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this is a little late since the last reviews, but it's a great fic. I've only recently got into Palletshipping and you fic's the best one yet. Especially that part where Misty is screaming after seeing Ash and Gary together and the "feisty, little hamster" parts. But also a nicely written sexscene, anyway, keep doing what you're doing, it's fabulous! ^_^
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Title: =D~~~~
Reviewed By: Shrewy (Shrew-hanyou on ff.net) On: September 23, 2004 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
SQUEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *pause* *shifty glance* I love this story and *flick* You and SP must write/rp more of them *nods* *pause again* o_O Sorry if I am scaring/confusing ye -Shrewy
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Reviewed By: Lady Moon On: July 15, 2004 02:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Still RITF LMAO* *finlly catchs breath* That was great. I love this fic. I hope you contole it. I would love to see what else happens. Please contole.
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Reviewed By: oneontainternet On: June 06, 2003 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic and could actual happen (though as long as there's a series, I could say there it won't) in the world of Pokemon. I'v always though Ash and Gary would be a great couple. |
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good, hot sex scene, but a bit on the mushy side. I likethe interaction between the characters and the Hormones. Hehe, it was cute, but a bit more detail and less mush would have made it a killer. ^^ |
Reviewed By: the_dude On: April 09, 2003 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
more now .
this is a very good fic and i love your writing style |
Reviewed By: the_dude On: March 24, 2003 05:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Good fic add more chapters please? |
Reviewed By: Mi-chan On: January 30, 2003 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice fic. *still blushing after reading it though smiling at the same time* What does 'fichen sie euf' mean? |
