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| "Sunburn" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aww ^^ cute ^^ poor Duo, such unhappy thoughts ^^ nice job with this, especialy with beuilding up to the climax there near the end ^-^ I enjoyed the story very much, especialy the commentary-style used in some of the writing done here ^^ It over all made the happenings of the story more effective ^-^ Though with most all stories, there are a few grammatical errors or typing errors ^-^ but that's all fine and dandy ^-^
| Reviewed By: Undine Love On: February 15, 2003 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniffle* That is so sweet. The sap-bug deffinitly bit Heero in the ass. Good! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: January 31, 2003 04:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HHHHHmmmm,.....it's ok i guess,...not too good,..but not too bad either,...ya could make it a lil bit more angsty,...and a lil less too mushy and sappy,...not that sappy isn't nice or anything,...all in all,..a nice one,...and i like it,...till next time,...Jaaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaanbbbateeeeeee-Neeee!!^_~!! |
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