| "The Forsaken" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Requiem Duindain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm impressed. You write really well. Plaese don't leave us hanging. I really want to read more. |
Reviewed By: Sesshie-samasmate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it and adding in lyrics from Disturbed just puts it even higher on my top ten reads list. Can't wait to read the rest.
Sesshie-samasmate
A.K.A.
Lu |
Reviewed By: D4 Phr0g [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your style of writing! I definately want to read more of this. But having to look down for a translation every time I came across a phrase I didn't understand was a bit annoying. Maybe you could find a way to show both the language and the translation?
Anyway, great job, and I look forward to reading more! |
