| "Change of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Haruka and Michiru On: May 19, 2004 11:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOO don't pair Haruka and Michiru up with some guy just leave them as they are and bring AMI in the game I think that girl NEEDS some fun BADLY if you catch my drift ^_- Please write more don't wait too long to update!!!!
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Reviewed By: Harukaking On: May 19, 2004 11:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
moooree and make an other girls apearence with H&M *hehe* shore do like to see THAT. ^__-
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Reviewed By: etenal sky king On: May 19, 2004 11:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was great story and put an other girl in ^_- you know withthose two ^_^
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Reviewed By: dablob On: November 28, 2003 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue or i'll send U 2 the firey pits of hell!! JK!!
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Reviewed By: Codie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was sooooo good. Please update, I cant wait to see what you do in the later chapters. |
Reviewed By: stary_night On: February 05, 2003 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know,this story sounds familiar.infact,its exactly the same as story on fanfiction.net.do you write there to? |
