| "Stray Kitten" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice Sardius! It moved along very smoothly. So sweet and romantic. Give Yoji and Aya a happily ever after, please? ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Lilla On: February 02, 2003 12:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh thanks a lot dear girl, I don't deserve all this...
As for the beta eh... My bad betaed it while still drooling over the lemon scene, so it is all my fault, if a couple mistakes escaped. Still will try to do better next time. Of course I might not be able to if I am drooling too badly. ^.^;;; |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: February 02, 2003 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it was okay ?_?...are you KIDDING!!!!!! It was BREATHTAKING...excellent ^______^!!!!!!! The way you're writing and the Lemon scene^^....GREAT, no matter how many lemons^^ you've read, each one is BREATHTAKING....EXCELLENT^^! All the stuff you're writing is really really GREAT...YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE....SOOOOON!!!!!! *that's an order!!!!* ^____~
I wonder when you're updating "Colours of My Life"...hopefully soon^_^...OOONEEEEGAAAIIII^^!!!!!!!
Ja *MORE MORE MORE...*
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: neko-chan On: February 02, 2003 00:49 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh, write more of this please! so good! some of the grammar could use work, but it's not really bad and doesn't take away from the story at all. update soon! |
Reviewed By: kamibukurosama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
^____^ (mou, ff.net is misbehaving)
This fic is so sweet and though Aya is OOC, I think I like him better like this. I really hope to see more soon, I'm a big fan now!
ja ne
kami-chan |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 18:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, really nice! I like the pairing XD!( |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, really nice! I like the pairing XD!( |
Reviewed By: Isa-chan On: February 01, 2003 10:50 CST
Comment/Review:
WAI!!! This is so good!! I want more Please please please!!! *glomps* You always do such cool fics! *bounces* YAY!!!! |
Reviewed By: kamibukurosama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaaa!!! *glomps you* That was wonderful, i loved this fic so much because so wrote it so well. you have this nice of way of describing emotions and the lemon ending was great too. cant wait for ur next fic! take care!
kami-chan |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue On: February 17, 2003 16:28 CST
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^_^ I liked!!! |
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