| "The Other Side Of Me" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 07:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! That was cute ^_^. Really really cute.
I've just found a few mistakes in your chapter 2, but they're not too big. ^_^ Nice work. Keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Interesting fic there. ::nods:: Yep! Very interesting. Very very interesting.
I've a little hard time making out which one of them said this line or the other line, but it wasn't that bad. It's kinda good start too ^-^ REALLY.
Uhm... I've found a lot of grammar or spelling mistakes. Do you have a beta-reader? I can also beta-read for you if you don't mind.
I think it's quite original. VERY original. I wonder what will happen next... I hope you'll update soon.
I like it so far, well written of course, but just a lot of misspelled words. Keep sending them!!!
Keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: MysticalElf78 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So you hate me and my reviewers Eh? Read this before you Roast in Hell |
Reviewed By: KK3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great ^.^ Can't wait for the next chappie^^ Ttyl. |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru On: February 03, 2003 02:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great!! very good fan-fic, probubly alot better than i could ever do, i've read alot, and this is a pretty good one! it had funney parts interesting parts and a lil action parts i was worried about yoai on that one part in da river o.0 but good there wasn't any, keep it up! i'm looking forward to reading your next one!!! |
Reviewed By: Karina On: February 01, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good, but it still needs some work. Itīs off to a good start, though. Itīs already quite interesting. |
Reviewed By: greyfoxx2002 On: February 01, 2003 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fic it leads you on as something more but it still entertains. The paring is always a good one seto/yugi *hey rivals always make good pairings ;)* well continue writing and trust me you'll go a long way peace... |
