| "Book 2: Love faces many an obstacle" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: keiichi-san On: April 22, 2004 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It rules i want more book 3 and book 4 and book 5 please
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Title: Fan Fic
Reviewed By: Ugleboi On: September 30, 2003 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one went more in detail with the others, though i still like the first book better. All in all, i read it through so consider yourself a pretty damn good writer.
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Title: Another success!
Reviewed By: SuOrD On: September 03, 2003 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first book was good, i truly hope u continue with this story, it is throughly enjoyable. Your characters are above and beyond. I hope you keep writing this because i will assureadly keep reading. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO! Tell me there's more!! Please don't stop here!!!!!! It's so wonderful! They're all in one place again! Hope you update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! Hopefully they'll meet up now! Ah, and now the moment I've been waiting for... |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Odder and odder, but I like it. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O ....that's all that can be said... |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting.... |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, as much as I like turtle-girl...I think she only makes a good friend ne? I dun like how trouble's brewing up.. oh no.. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was odd. Too bad about the misunderstanding. Ah, but love will find a way!
...-smacks self- That sounded unbelievably sappy. Eww... |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally, I say forget Naru...but you aren't, are you? lol. Good chapter. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK! If only Suu came a minute later!!! -sigh- Ah, but I knew it was coming. you had set it up so nicely. I was like..." This is too perfect..."
Heh, anyways, good plot and love-life going on here. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK! If only Suu came a minute later!!! -sigh- Ah, but I knew it was coming. you had set it up so nicely. I was like..." This is too perfect..."
Heh, anyways, good plot and love-life going on here. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Imagine that. I go looking for another good Love Hina fic, and I find something better; THE SEQUEL!!! Wow, what luck. I love how it starts out. I shouldn't even have to tell you how much I liked that last scene. WOOT! |
