| "Countdown to Armageddon" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Jam( to family) Dilan ( to friends) On: April 12, 2003 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UP DATE, UP DATE, UP DATE, UP DATE, UP DATE!!!!
Up date already!! |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: April 10, 2003 18:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a really great fan-fic! Keep going!! :D |
Reviewed By: Solitaire and Xpyne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 19:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Solitaire: Ooh, first to guess correctly. Does that mean I get a prize? ^_~ Just kidding; hooking Yami and Seto up would make me exstatically happy enough.
I really enjoyed this chapter. Poor Ouji. He's so cute. Heh. And the Dark Magicain was going to Dark-Magic-Attack his butt... *giggles* I'm glad Seto's coming up soon, though. Ouji-chan needs a friend. The poor boy was completely uprooted from everything he knew, and is now in a strange place with a murderous psycho for a dad. u_u Yayness for Seto, and I can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: March 23, 2003 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a Fantastic Story.....Tremendously sad and heart breaking, but still a Fantastic Story!!
Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: March 14, 2003 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That has to be one of the Best prologues I have ever had the pleasure of reading. If the rest of the story is half as good........I'll be hooked!!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 13:30 CST
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Who are these people? And more importantly why the hell should I care? Four chapters and you have yet to tell who these people are.
Honey either do an original fic or do a YGO fic as it stands you can't seem to make up your mind on what you want to do. And to be blunt I don't see why I should care either way.
Kindly get over yourself and let us know who these people are instead playing silly games with the reader.
Icz |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
you used etecetra*is really happy*fianlly someone spelled my nick name right^_^well anyway i love your story and i was thinking maybe you could put me in the story as wellhehee=^_^=okay well let me know bye!!!!!!!*goes to sleep*so sleepy zzzzzzzzz |
Reviewed By: mi m'o On: February 27, 2003 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well...i am rather impressed by this so far. i think you need to apologize less at the start and finish of each chapter, and just screw your courage and dive into the story!
you've got a great idea, i'd really like to see it develope! interaction between characters seems to be going well, and the dialogue is just great.
so far so good!
and your setting is fantastic! i have a fetish for this kind of story (the ancients), and in my travels, i've been hard-pressed to find ones i enjoy--this has great potential, and i really want to see more!
i hope you can keep the quality as high as you have it--if not higher! (oi! no one's perfect when it comes to grammar & especially spelling, but you're on the high end of almost perfect! i commend you!)
must see more! dying of curiosity! ESPECIALLY interested the king--oh! ouji's cute! it's just a word meaning 'prince' in japanese! it doesn't really belong to anyone...!^^
looking for more!
ja!
mi m'o |
Reviewed By: Alona On: February 10, 2003 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it. Really. It's great. Wonderful. I really, really, really, want to read more. Please?????? Please??? |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH I like this story... more pwweez |
Reviewed By: Achika-chan On: February 02, 2003 16:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Malik's Ancient Egyptian Dad was Yami's bodyguard. Hmm. YOu must continue soon. |
Reviewed By: Bleeding Star Goddess On: February 01, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this quite a bit and hope for more. |
