Reviewed By: Youkosgirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 13:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I loved your fic. but if you could put a little more adjectives in the story it be great, oh, and another thing it kinda needs a little more action, all though i`m in no current potion to talk. (see`s u with a crossbow pointed at her head) Please write more... oh, and one more thing i forgot to mention...(arrow misses her head by 2 inches) well i get the point and i`m leaving!ja ne(runs away screaming bloody murder)Please update soon!!!
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