| "Mmm... Kinky!" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black Dragons Gothic child [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was realy realy realy good is there gonna be another chapter??!?!?!?!?!!!? |
Reviewed By: SaintMe On: March 09, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are by far, the most EVIL person on the planet!! WRITE A THIRD FOR THIS! PLEASE!? I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER!! (not like I don't already, but you get the picture ^_^) |
Reviewed By: Seremira On: March 10, 2003 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm... Mirai and Chibi? How chibi? ........ Dende forgive us for our oh so guilty pleasures!!!! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, as weird as this is going to sound, u didn't do too bad on the 8th chapter cause it's not like u made it 20 pages or anything. Lol. Personally, I'm a lot more scared of viewing chapter 5... *shudders* But what I'm wondering is could u put a "17/Trunks" in here somewhere? Didn't think u'd mind using Trunks 3 times, since u've used Goku and Vegeta so much. Plus, 17's got way too much sex appeal to go unnoticed! *hentai smirk* I know ur capable of it... |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 18:28 CST
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Aack, forget the last part of the previous comment, I have a short term memory, but sequels r always good... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 19:23 CST
Comment/Review:
...
o.O
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
I just can't believe you did that!!
*pales
This is just soooo gross!
I just can't believe you did that!
And so good!
I mean, for the squickyness of this it was actually pretty good since you did it from Goku's point of view....
... but...
it's still GROSS!!!
I will definetely think twice before I ever challenge you to anything again!
Now I have to find a way to top this..
Hmm..
...
maybe I should paint a pic on this..
..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!
ACK! IMAGE!
*hits her own head
TWACK!
TWACK!
TWACK!
*smirk
only one thing: In "Eye of the tiger", which is the sequel to "Eye of the Dragon" Vegeta was the panther and Goku was the tiger, but thats artist's freedom.. *ggg
I must bow to the master, Jady.. the master of squickyness! |
Reviewed By: Kis On: February 09, 2003 00:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG...I have read Serapha's fic before... so...ano...
...you actually wrote it!!! *lmao!* |
Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. um.... that was OO amasingly different!
i liked it ^^
I've read both Eye of the Tiger and Eye of the Dragon and i have to say that whole Vegeta is a panther thing is very sexy. yumness
that was very interesting, lucky Nappa ^^ hehehee |
Reviewed By: Tanzina&Mikana On: February 05, 2003 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Tanzina whispers to Mikana* I hope she doesn't think we're stalking her, we really just like her stories..*notices Jady*
Tanzina: We love it! Definatly chapter 6 and 7 the most though...*both girls go off into a fantasy of Vejita and either Trunks before Jady coughs to get their attention again. The girls wipe the drool from their mouth* Keep writing this stuff, love it! |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 07:16 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this little series.. I liked it on ff.net and I like it here. Despite the fact that Goku and geta are my favourite paring I do enjoy the.. more strange combinations too.
Somewhere you said you're doing squick-pairings too. Well, then I challenge you! Read my story "Eye of the Dragon" and see if you can write a lemon on THAT! I bet not! If you're able to pull through with that, I'll.. err.. I'll ..well, to be honest I'd be so grossed out that I'd probably not be able to read yaoi for a month. Still, the challenge is declared! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 20:41 CST
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Haha, good desc change. ^_^ And I almost forgot to mention - the follow-up to "Double Double" begs to be written. Vegeta with Goku and Kakkarotto... :drools: |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ho-leee... what a glorious collection! My faves: Forbidden Room and Dominatrix. Yeah, I'm a kinky bitch. ^_^ I would have read this a lot sooner if you'd labeled it as yaoi! I'm so glad I decided to click on it & check it out!
Want To See: Radditz' "punishment" (eh heh heh heh heh...) and "finding out who the real dominatrix is."
Oh, glorious indulgence. ^_^
9 on spelling/grammar for occasional word misusage & homonym flubs. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 00:42 CST
Comment/Review:
that... is... so... CRUEL! no fair! *cries*
it was freaking good though :) cant wait to read the others... heh |
Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to read one about Piccolo and Gohan. I hope you do one for them soon. But, your story rocks!! |
Reviewed By: THE killer rabbit On: February 08, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love em' all. There all so original and... wow.
I got some ideas for you since i'm such a wounderfully imaginitave pervert. How about marai trunks/Gt trunks(chibi trunks).Trunks is so sexy no matter what timeline he's from!! Or Radditz/goten. I don't see how either would be possible but hey! I can dream! thankee! |
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