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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 13:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIs WaS SUch a GooD Story!!!1!!!!YaH!!!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 22:20 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chappie three was really sad, i can't believe how great a writer you are. please continue.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 09:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad I found your fics. This fic wuz wonderful. I guess if I wuz in Inuyasha's place, I might of act like that too. His attitude wuz nasty long bfore kags born, n he did try to kill her too. So it's only natural for him to turn 'evil' again. I kinna think it wuz hot.lol. It had a wonderful and funny ending. The whol lime like scene wuz cute. You're such a wonderful writing.^^ Keep it up!!! Am so glad i found these fics...
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Title: ...wow...
Reviewed By: Whoops_I_dont_exist [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 12:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I just couldn't stop reading... And that's pretty good coming from me-I mean, uh.. Whoops! I don't exist!! *shifty eyes*
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Reviewed By: fallen_guardian_angel On: April 26, 2006 06:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh,my god i love that story. i soon as i started reading it i couldn't stop. you should really consider writing another inuyasha and kagome story.
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Reviewed By: mont On: April 16, 2006 02:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exillent i loved it u should make a sequel
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2006 22:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally I'm not much of a fan for romantic stuff, but this is a truly excellent work. Keep up the Good work, this is a truly complete work. PUT OUT SOME MORE LIKE THIS!!!
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta2003 On: March 14, 2006 02:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh I enjoyed that story so much. Man i stayied up until 4:56am to finish. I will have to read more of your Fanfics. Later
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Reviewed By: the brilliant dance x On: March 10, 2006 15:04 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I loved it! ^____^ I have distanced myself from Inuyasha...but I couldn't help but read this story! Mmmm, the passionate scene at the end was quite enjoyable. =] I'm glad you didn't insert a lemon because one, they definately wouldn't do it in the house when everyone was there, and two, in my opinion, Kagome would definately not have sex at her age. She seems a little...more conservative then that. Anyways, the whole story was just breathtaking....I saw a few mistakes here and there, and the plot has been used before, but you wrote it so well that it made up for all that. I loved how you described their emotions, and you are one of the first people that I have seen write Kaede's accent perfectly! XD Overall, wonderful job m'dear ^___^
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Reviewed By: Lady Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 13:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing, but what has happened to InuYasha in the beginning. He loves her. How could you let this happen? Please respond.
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Title: Beautiful!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 08:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely beautiful! ^^ I've only read a few fics that had the rosary broken and this is definitely one of my favourites. :) You captured the essences of the characters very well and left me wishing there was more. Ah well, all good things come to an end, hehe. I encourage you to keep writing more Inuyasha fanfics and I hope to read another one soon! My only suggestion for your future fanfics is to make them longer by adding more detail. ;)
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Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 03:40 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely excellent story!! I enjoyed reading every second of it and I truly believe you captured the characters' true essence. ^^ Even though there was no Miroku or Sango I believe that allowed you to focus more on Inu, Kag, and Ship and give them more detailed personalities and more angst. I was surprised at how effortlessly you dealt with the plot and shaped it and made it into somethign beautiful. I truly hope you continue writing more Inuyasha fanfics as you truly have a gift. ^^ My only suggestion for improvement would be to make your chapters lengthier and your stories longer. ;)
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 09:11 PST
Comment/Review:
Nice...hands down!
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Reviewed By: melonious On: February 14, 2006 16:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello, i think this fanfic was absolutely brilliant, it was funny, sad, and it really spoke from the characters, you could really put us in their shoes, which i find an amazing talent, you're an excellent writer, and i hope you persue this writting style, it's very charming. Yours truly, Melanie ((nickname-Melonious))
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Reviewed By: SabKnight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 00:47 PST
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Wow! I really liked your story! I started reading it earlier this evening and I'm already finished! Your writing is wonderful! The ending (the REAL one) was very cute I thought...and I was impressed with your portrayal of Inuyasha and Kagome. So, that said, there's only one thing else: keep writing!
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