| "Blood-timeline" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] |
Reviewed By: Jukebox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've very much enjoyed this and some of the others you've written. I started reading Silver Rose on Nekojita's site and then searched to find other fics you may have posted elsewhere (such as at mediaminer.org). It's a shame you haven't updated Silver Rose or this arc in so long. Hopefully you will find your muse again soon and consider finishing them as I for one would love to see how they turn out. Yohji/Aya is my favorite pairing in the Weiss Kreuz fandom and your stories are written very well!
|
Reviewed By: Lana chan On: September 14, 2003 12:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lovly, lovly, lovly |
Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan On: July 02, 2003 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it...no matter how sickeningly sweet you think it is. *rubs your bruised muse's head* Oh my god...the reaction to Omiin the room was perfect...the way Aya tensed and went all protective and then calmed when he realized it was Omi!
Give us more! |
Reviewed By: Huge Aya/Yohji Fan On: July 01, 2003 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding! That was probably the best(if not one of the best) lemons I have ever read! I have never read a vampire fic with these two before. I really like the way it played out and it was crude or nasty just for the sake of being nasty. I have seen one or two on other sites but they didn't catch my attention enough to read them. Your are so right about vampires being sexy! My husband always comments on my fascination with them...ah well...what can you do?
I look forward to reading the other chapters posted here...You seem to be a very good and passionate writer!
Thank you for sharing your talent with us....Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Sunam devy On: June 13, 2003 05:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wooow.
I'm speach less. asuch a damn good fic! |
Reviewed By: beheena On: May 07, 2003 04:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it. but it's so short and rage is also kinda unfinished; Or had aya killed Yohji and that was the end???
hope to see more. |
Reviewed By: ronanana- chan On: April 12, 2003 06:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it beyound words. It is more then a just great or good. it's even more then wonderful.
I hope to see more |
Reviewed By: jahan On: March 24, 2003 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best Weiss fic's i've ever read.
Hope to see more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Sara_chan On: March 17, 2003 08:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Gods I've fallen in love with this fic. it's wonderful. |
Reviewed By: Aisha_Max [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 00:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Alright dammit I'll review! Can I help it if I'm too damn lazy to press the button and type stuff every time I read this story. I mean, do you realize how much work that takes.
Okay is all seriousness, or some at least, I love this story. And I will be officially pissed off if you don't continue. And you don't want that to happen. I might start harassing you, threatining you, ya know that kind of thing. I'm very attached to the fiction that I like. So far I love all of your stuff. This one is intriguing especially. Vampires and all. Very cool! Please continue soon. And if not this then something. I'll take anything! I just need more!
P.S. sorry about the radical reaction, it's the remorse of not reviewing sooner speaking through. |
Reviewed By: nekojita On: February 09, 2003 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It seemed like a pretty good lemon to me!!!! I like your take on a vampire Aya, it's refreshing, and I can't wait to see what happens the next day, as Yohji proves it's not a 1 time thing. I hope you write more of this fic. |
Reviewed By: Phlie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 11:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, I read the whole thing again cause it was so good in the first place...and I'm really glad that I did. This is so awesome! I can't wait for the sequel! |
Reviewed By: Verdorbene Unschuld [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was soo good! Yay! Youji doesnt die!!!!!!! i really ejoyed this, thanks for writing it |
Reviewed By: Angel~Rinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... whoa... I really never expected that to happen! Sure, it was fun to read, but then seeing the part about Aya as a vampire- well, it added more thrill to the excitment. ^____^ Very well written, displayed, and through-out wonderful. Keep up the good work. Peronsally, I think you need to write another chapter to this, just to see where it lands. ^^
- Angel ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'll admit that I came to read this to see what competition I was up against in the Valentine's Day fic contest. I may as well just withdraw my fic RIGHT NOW! This was truly INCREDIBLE!
Your style of writing is narrative and poetic at once. Yohji's seduction of Aya was beautifully written, and Aya's response was delicious. Even having never seen Weiss Kreuz (I live in the Midwest! Argh!) you have given such wonderful descriptions of both characters that I feel like I could jump into the show and be familiar with the two men.
And don't EVER again say that you can't write lemons, this one was intense and gorgeous! I'm anxious for this fic to continue! Beautiful work!! ^.^ |
| Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] |
