| "The One I Love Is..." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Matter On: February 16, 2003 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh....Grammar Check, Grammar Check, Grammar Check. PEOPLE CAN WE PLEASE USE PROPER GRAMMAR BEFORE WE SUBMIT THESE STORIES! And it's sad too..Cause I really like Eva.
Also...That dude in the other review was right. There was another story with this title. Now that story was the SH*T...Anyway later |
Reviewed By: Digipimp2000 On: February 11, 2003 22:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow... Man I've heard of constructive critisism but DAMN! Ever heard of asking nicely... I mean you don't have to come in here shooting your big ugly mouth off at ME! Sheesh. I really think you need a life man. You got a problem with me well you can take it up with my middle finger! |
Reviewed By: No WhereMan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 06:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok....for one thing stop. This title has already been reserved by an author that is worlds beyond your meager talents. If you aren't aware of Rakna's "The One I love is...." I would suggest finding it, reading it, then decide on a new title. |
Reviewed By: Akurei SilverHeart On: February 02, 2003 02:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^.^ Your good! |
