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| "Love is Blind" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: AyameLover#? On: November 09, 2004 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O Wow....that was soooo good!! Just amazing -- very kewl idea!!! You pulled it off nicely...way to go!!! Feel free to write another part to it...maybe from Hatori's perspective? Then again, that might ruin it..... Oh, well, I liked it alot, so keep up the good work!!!
| Reviewed By: Savara On: October 20, 2004 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Savara: * cries * ~*~ Raven: Ugg! Why did he have to say the L word! ~*~ Rena: Love! ~*~ Raven: Ewww! ~*~ Rena: All ya need is love! ~*~ Raven: Stop it! ~*~ Rena: Love, love love, la la love, la la love, makes the world go round. ~*~ Raven: Stop you, imbecile! ~*~ Rena: You can't hurt me with the things that you do, I'll pick up dandilions and I'll give them to you! ~*~ Savara: I loved it! *looks at Raven.* Why don't you swoon over bishies like normal teens? ~*~ Raven: Because I'm your other personality that hates loves, and the only thing I love is chaos. ~*~ Rena: Meanie! ~*~ Raven: *smiles evil smile * Evil, malice, death, decay, Just another working day. ~*~ Rena: *gives Raven a semi mean look * ~*~ Raven: When light refuses to give way to day, and children are too scared to play, abandon hope, embrace despair. You're destined for my dragon's lair. ~*~ Savara: I love your fanfic and writing style before Raven, and Rena make me even more insane. ~*~ Rena: Isn't that kinda impossible. We are voices in your head... ~*~ Savara: 0.o Shut up. Just shut up...
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