| "Tainted Love: Light and Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Kirei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 09:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I really loved it. But... YOU KILLED BAKURA! Aside from that, everything was perfect! ^_^; Uh, I can't wait for you next fic... Yay! Ryou/Bakura pairing! Heh, sorry... That's my favorite pairing... Anyways... Keep up the awesome writing, I know we all can expect the best from you!
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Reviewed By: xDemex [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Ra, you killed Kura... that part made me cry. Thus meaning, this fic was good. and it was good in all truth. ur a real good writer, ive read a lot, n this is one of the best. *i used "good" too much* LOL
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Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow.... Great story, very good.
Kiara: All the anger and torment... *sighs dreamily*
Orion: o_O w/e. Good Lemon as well. And we all love Ryou too!
Jack: I like Bakura better, and you played him out really well. Good for you!
Please continue this story!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: honeyduke On: February 09, 2003 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like the added yami/yugi dynamic... i think it would be nice if that got explored a bit more. love ryous answer to yugi. so kawii. |
Reviewed By: sarah the yaoi fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! First, let me tell you, I read a LOT of fics. Second, I only review the ones I really like. Third, this is friggin AWESOME! You are really talented, and I hope you consider posting other things you have written. You did a wonderful job characterizing (did I spell that right? Oh, well. v_v;) Ryou and his yami. I love the plot. R/B rapes have been done a million times, but you really capture the essence of their emotions. The best works are usually started out of boredom, but they evolve into something that is so much more. I really see your fic becoming something great. I won't let this get too long, but I just had to give you some encouragement (that's probably spelled wrong too. v_v;). Keep up the awesome work, and I hope to see more of this story soon. Ja.
Sarah |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 07, 2003 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR FIC! Write more! You know though? You made me fell sorry for Yami Bakura and cant believe in Ryou! Wich I thought will never happen! But I still Love them both! Write more A.S.A.P. |
Reviewed By: Yuki On: February 06, 2003 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR FIC! Not bad for the first time! I thought it was not your first time! WOW! Write more A.S.A.P. Bye! And I LOVE Ryou, Bakura, And Yami! Yugi TOO! |
Reviewed By: PsychoticInnocence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 22:39 CST
Comment/Review:
*author* ^_^ whee actually I'm surprized I'm writing this, I"m not a yugi+Ryou fan either! O___O Quite honestly, my first opinion on them was "wow... two ukes... that can't work..." but when I started this fic, (which I started because I was bored...tired...up really late...and playing incredibly repetative video games...and I get really creepy ideas then O.o;;) I didn't have a plot..just started..and then made it up as I go along. Yay! ( that's why my begining is REALLY creepy *sweatdrop* ) |
Reviewed By: Ling-Ling (RCDenki@aol.com) On: February 05, 2003 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LL: OMIGOSH! I looooooooooved that! Okay, so the part at the beginning was a tad on the creepy side (I read yaoi lemons a lot, so I'm more-or-less used to stuff like that), but it was well written none the less. I'm not exactly a huge Ryou+Yugi fan, but I still like it. A lot. Keep writing! Ciao! |
Reviewed By: malikzgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow........this was good
suggestions:add malik and his yami to the story *smirk
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 09:45 CST
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i. like. very. much. keep on goin! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 10:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*reads second chp again* i love it! lately ppl havent been updating enough... well either have i but anywayz i really really like this! bakura and ryou is soooooooooooooo KAWAIIIIIII!!!!!! i personaly like yami/yugi, but anyways i really like this! i love the way bakura treats ryou *cough* anywayz pls continue soon! |
