| "House of Ashes" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: wynter On: June 03, 2003 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a preatty good fict, i injoyed it until the end i finish reading chapter 3. u gota finish please *_* |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! LOL...I love this. Youre a talented writer. One thing that stuck with me was your description of Chichi being "sharp as a tack." If you ever need help with this fic, maybe beta-ing or something, I would be happy to do it. I am eagerly awaiting another chapter should you choose to write it. It would be a shame to leave it unfinished. Good luck! Bai! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is GOOD. I can't believe I'm the only one who's reiviewed this so far! It seems someone already thinks Chi-Chi is a royal pain in thhe ass! Hurry and Update! |
