| "Pondering" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Cory On: August 22, 2003 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
"And it came out. It came out like bullets from a gun"
LMAO. thats funny, really. its so figuratively put, its so romantic. and i know we alllll assume we know what "it" is. DAYUM BABY YOU WIRTE SOME GOOD STUFF.
hehehehe your a moron. |
Reviewed By: MurkyMirror [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 07:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahem but where exactly is the rest of this? I mean sheesh woman, you just can't post something so utterly cute and sexy and not go through with it! Gods, I'm simpering like a foolio right now. This is so cute!
I like Aya trying to bring Ken out. Who is that chatty lady? What will happen? How hot will the sex be? These are questions I need to be answered.
~*~deena~*~ |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 12:13 CST
Comment/Review:
You know, just picturing Aya in boxers like that is SO delicious! I can't wait for yummy Aya/Ken goodness or Ken/Aya...or whatever way you'd like to write it! ^_~ Post the next part soon! Sorry it took me a while to review. I am a complete 'tard sometimes. >. |
Reviewed By: Isa-chan On: February 03, 2003 06:56 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY!! I like your fic so far, can't wait for more! *grins and winks* your doing a good job! |
Reviewed By: kamibukurosama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
^_____^
Yaay! Glad to see you're trying a lemon, and so far it looks very very good. Can't wait to see the next part, dont keep me waiting too long, ne? ^_~ talk to ya soon, ja ne!
kami-chan |
