| "No One Will Notice" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Holy
Reviewed By: BulmaCanGetIt On: June 28, 2016 00:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY MOTHER OF GOD, THAT WAS HAWT!! Bulma and Vegeta getting
it on in public is so thrillingly sexy. And I want to point out
that no matter how discreet they tried to be afterwards, I'm sure
the fluids running down Bulma's legs afterwards would've given them
away anyway. Which I find sexy but I'm a pervert for both Bulma and
Vegeta so... I also like the little bits on Trunks and Goten. Lol.
Nice.
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Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 23:34 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*snickers*
I had to be in the PURRRfect mood to read this. Now was then. ;)
*hehehe* There are SO many parts that I loved... like how she never got used to him saying "panties" and the "pillows" comment. *blushes* Bulma and Vegeta aren't the only ones guilty around here.
O.O Videotapes??? It was a ... bet!?!? *facevaults*
*snickers and blushes again* You must've been thinking about "the morning after" chapter and that little argument Bulma had with herself about whether or no to SHARE her "collection" ;)
*blinks* It's so eery... these two remind me of-- O.O ...where were you last friday?!?!?!? *lol* j/k We were aLONE... |
Reviewed By: carmela On: February 10, 2003 09:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writing but i still don't get how they knew about it and the connection between the video tapes |
Reviewed By: lemon luver On: February 06, 2003 17:41 PST
Comment/Review:
mmmm..luved it
OH OH...u should do a sequel..like about what bulma duz as revenge to Veggie for embarrassin her in front of everybody!!! ^.^..hentai collection...lol |
Reviewed By: eyes_on_the_birdie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 23:30 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved that...kinky as hell! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 13:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How embarrassing! but very nice lemon anywayz. OMK the end was so funny my appendix started hurting! thats how hard I was laughing! lol great fic! so funny.lol |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 20:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good I loved it |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 19:24 PST
Comment/Review:
hmmmm.... hehe exciting..... and funny as well.... lol poor bulma...... wait.... what the hell am i saying ...lucky bulma... |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: February 03, 2003 16:45 PST
Comment/Review:
Whew! What else can I say? Is it hot in here, or is it just me? |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 16:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I LOVED THIS ^^
IT WAS SOOOOO FUNNy....and I loved the lemon ^^
heh, the Trunks and Goten thing was a bit weird though....lol
I can't bealive you didn't tell me about this in our emails X(
My email has been acting up lately and I can't get in without the ocmputer freezing
my dad's friend is coming over to fix it soon so I'lll reply as soon as possibly
GREAT STORY ^^ |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 10:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... Exciting and Entertaining. I can' wait to see the following chapters. |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 03, 2003 10:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was great !!! I loved it u r one of my fave authors! I enjoy a good no no great lemon with our dinamic duo. Keep the fics on coming!!
I need a cold shower and a smoke and I dont even Smoke so damn! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 07:05 PST
Comment/Review:
Everyone noticed??!! (blushed for Bulma) How embarassing, but it was funny! Loved it! |
Reviewed By: Snazzy On: February 03, 2003 06:51 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like short lemon stories, and this is no exception. Great fic. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 05:51 PST
Comment/Review:
:squirms: Very erotic, nicely IC! |
