| "Return of the One Winged Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Cara On: February 07, 2003 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think they were talking about breakfast. lmao. nice story. there were some typos tho o well it was still cool. cya lata. |
Reviewed By: magegirl On: February 05, 2003 06:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Shinobi I like your fic considering I helped you with the ending. ^_^ Keep writing good fics like these. |
