| "Behind the Veil" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Pyro Dragon On: August 01, 2003 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this was great! Update, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEE |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts On: June 18, 2003 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yugi: Take 1, Scene 1
Me: More? Ok, let me restate that. More!!! I command you!!!
Yugi: Stop!!! How can you command her? She's the authoress and you have no control over her. Restate that restatement before I...
Me: (whimpering) Ok, Ok.
Yugi (happily) Good! Ok, Take 2 Scene 1
Me: Please write more!!! |
Reviewed By: nikkei On: March 14, 2003 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so fuckin' great! there just just aren't any good seto/ yami fics out there! UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Sun Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 10:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is good, very good, though the spelling and grammar has a few questionable erm problems. Perhaps get an editor, hehe, like me ^-^. I edit some peoples work. Anyway, great, keep writing please! |
Reviewed By: Jewel On: February 19, 2003 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! Write more! Write more! Write more! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok? |
