| "Things Aren't Always in Black and White" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Still Waiting...
Reviewed By: Oracle of the Stars On: November 22, 2004 23:28 CST
Comment/Review:
You know...it's been over a year and still no update. Are you ever planning on finishing this? Oh...and give Joey a dragon creature. I know there's not one in the game, seeing as how the first three creatures are a cow, a gorilla, and a tiger, but I think a dragon would fit him better. Besides, if it's the Red Eyes Black Dragon, that would work great.
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Reviewed By: Jeshone On: May 05, 2003 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um, just wanted to say that it is cool that some writer has finally gotten the balls to do something like that. I think it is pure genius to have Seto be a girl plus I think this way be the first story were someone has tried that with Seto, so umm, story is great keep up the good work and make the creature be a female. |
Reviewed By: Jeshone On: May 05, 2003 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um, just wanted to say that it is cool that some writer has finally gotten the balls to do something like that. I think it is pure genius to have Seto be a girl plus I think this way be the first story were someone has tried that with Seto, so umm, story is great keep up the good work and make the creature be a female. |
Reviewed By: Jeshone On: May 05, 2003 11:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one is great and some of your best work yet keep up the good work, cause this story is really cool. |
Reviewed By: Super Bitch On: April 03, 2003 01:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Holy Joey!!! This is interesting!
Now put more up! |
Reviewed By: Jeshulen On: April 02, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and by far one of the most creative Yug. stories out there. As for what critter Joey should get be creative why not something that is a combination of alot of other creatures or something mythical. It should fit Joey's personality and therefore be as wild and choatic as he is. Anyway keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Gem the Warrior Elf On: February 24, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice work angel. this is better than i expected. btw to any1 that's reading this (excluding angel) i own shaenaur, not angel *glares at angel* i can't believe u forgot again. anyway don't forget ta post da next chap, or i'll bug u 'till ya do, and we BOTH know how good i am at bugging people (think library)...
^~_'^ |
