| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 04:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Well...I suppose, in some manner of justifying Yohji's, er, somewhat misguided actions, one could view it as over-the-top denial. Big time. As if he could maybe pour his love and passion into the still body beneath his and make it whole again. Um, yeah. That works.
Ken's bitterness as he recounted all the people who hurt him was painfully written.
And through all this, the funny thing is, I feel the worst for Yohji. (Shrugs) |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 15:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Well as long as reviewing hurts God.... *beams*
This was... interesting.. o.O Poor Kenken... I was actually expecting him to spite both Yohji and Aya and kill himself. But that's me. I think everyone is going to kill themselves. ^^;; Suicide = Angst. |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 12:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Wickedness! Bad Yohji! That is hellishly gross. I don't think KenKen sounded like too much of a drama queen. In his situation, I would have made his reaction seem like a walk through the daisies. *shudder* Good job with this!
~Midori^_~ |
