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| "The Official Fanfiction University of Rumiko Takahashi!" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 19:49 CDT
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I'm back! Hey! Don't run away!
Kouga: You have that affect on people.
Me: O_O! What are you doing here?
Kouga: *shrugs* Don't ask me... your the one typing creating your own bizzare universe, why I have to be a part of it is beyond me.
Sheesh! *typing*
Kouga: *leans over ssjprincess' shoulder reading* Huh? *disappears and reappears in the middle of the room* What are you typing?!
ssjprincess: I'll read it to you as I type the rest. *chuckles evily as she resumes typing* Suddenly, the area around Kouga grew dark causing him to look up to find the cause. His eyes widen in shock and disbelief, and before he had a chance to say anything a giant boulder landed on his cute, pony-tailed head.
Kouga: x_X
ssjprincess: Teach you to call my world bizzare! *clears her throat* Sorry 'bout that. I guess I haven't cured myself of my goofy reviewing today. *shrugs* I normally try to be a bit more serious, but alas, I just don't feel like it today! :P lol So, with that said, on with the reviewing.....
Well, it seems Karl made an excellent recovery from his injuries. He's back with the group, which is a good thing since Cait and he were the only ones that would go get Kikyo's bow! *mumbles something about a stupid priestess* Anyhow, Saki and I had to find Ranma's socks. lol I have one question, though..... you said we found everything except for the lingerie... you never mentioned how we got Sesshoumaru's fur. Awww... I would have been interested to find out HOW we managed that one! lol
What's this? We have Ryouga as a guide? That seems a bit counter-productive to me. lol Hmmm.. he blew up the walls, well, I guess it worked out after all. ^_^ *laughing* Oh no! Rain. lol Our cursed members of the team.... A freak and a pervert smasher. lol O_O! A thrown bookshelf! Karl, geez! lol Well, it seems the team is down to three since one member is currently out to rid the world of perverts (a shame I might add! lol), while the other is searching for.... *O_o;* world dominating...penguins? *blink* *blink blink* O....kay. *shrugs* I hope you find them, Saki. lol
Ok, maybe a silly question, but why is there a trail of fish shaped cookies? And why exactly do we know it's a trail from Pia's group? And more importantly, WHY ARE WE BLANTLY FOLLOWING IT? *bops the other girls on the head* Hello? We do realize it's going to be a trap...right?
*bops herself on the head* I took a bite out of that cookie? Well, that sure was a smart thing to do! Gee, maybe Pia has a poisioned apple she can give me while she's at it. ~_^
Paralyzed. I deserve it for being so darned gullible! *shakes her head* Ugh! Well, three down. That leaves Cait and Melody to succeed in the scavenger hunt. You go girls!
Dead fish? Poor Melody! It will take quite a few shammpoo's to get that stink out of her hair! lol The team isn't having much luck at the moment. One more down. That leaves just good ol' Cait to do the job.
We got all the items! *sticks her tongue out at Pia* What? All the member have to be present? Awww...
*Laughing* They won a week of detention! lol Thankfully Kodachi was in their group. ^_^ *laughing harder* Pia thought she was the winner just a moment ago, now her world is rubbing her face in the ground, so to speak. lol
Ranma is going to be in for a BIG surprise when he returns to his room! lol *Grins diabolically* Maybe... just maybe Akane will see it first!
Lum: *smirking and shrugging* I don't know 'who' sent that note saying that Ranma needed to speak with her about something serious in his room.
Me: That's just evil. *smile* Funny as heck, but soooo evil. lol
The prize was a bag of stale doughnuts? O_o; Well, I see the staff went to great expense for the prize. *rolls her eyes*
LOL! I kinda feel sorry for Pia. A green and pink striped Pia, at that! lol Run, Cait, run! It serves Pia right though.
Pia: O_O! What? *eyes twitching*
ssjprincess: O_O!! Eek! *runs off as well!
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Anyway, I'm glad I'm all caught up. Those chapters were great. I can't wait for the next chapter and the field trip. By the way, sign me up, I'm willing to go. Hopefully, I won't get paralyzed this time. lol
~**ssjprincess**~
or
Alexis the Immobile ^_^
P.S. Sorry this was so long.....again. | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:35 CDT
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Eek! I missed your last update! *bows head in shame* Sorry, but I have been swamped with Real Life stuff, darnit! *sigh* I was looking forward to this chapter, too.... Oh well, I guess I'll just have to read and review a bit late....
Now, let's see, where can everyone go for a field trip.... Hmmm... I know, they can go to the Jusenky and push Ranma and Akane in the 'Spring of a Drowned Man and Woman not Afraid to express his true feelings.' And while we're at it we can push Inuyasha and Kagome in as well! lol Or they can go to the Sengoku Jidai and spend some time roughing it as Inuyasha and the gang usually do. *shrugs* I can't think of anything too creative at the moment... On to the story....
You go Naruku! Tell it like it is, Mr. Cool-Tattoo-On-His-Back! It's not easy being a bad guy AND a mother of unrully offspring! O_o;; lol
Naraku: *sniff* I know! I tell you, you go and try and kill a few bothersim people and you get this bad wrap!
Me: O_o;; Ahhhhh....Naraku...you are evil....
Naraku: Not really, that's just the persona I have to portray for everyone else....*sigh* The real me is quite.... deep. I like to spend time reading Romantic novels by the fireplace, and fix little Kanna's pretty hair....*shakes head* I'm so misunderstood...
ME: *stares at Naraku as if he has sprouted another offspring right in front of her eyes* I am seriously disturbed right now! O_o;;
Naraku: All those evil deeds are just a cry for love and attention. And one more thing, Meowm_, Buyo is kinda.... sexy.
Me: *eye twitch*
lol
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Sorry. lol After that stupid exchange, I think I need another semester at the University! I think that undeniably is a definte case of OOC! lol
Ah! A scavenger hunt! Sounds interesting. No killing? *snaps fingers and looks crestfallen* There goes all the fun! *brightens up* Stealing, bribing, and blackmailing are okay! well, I guess that will make things interesting. There was no mention of maiming, hmmm... lol
Yay! I'm in the fic! Thank you! *bows then tightens the rope surrounding Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha, Miroku, and Kouga* Now, if you'll just give me these, I be your eternal slave!
Inuyasha: *raises eyebrow* Eternal?
Miroku: *waggles his eyebrows and smirks* I'm a slave.... A slave to love.
Everyone and me: O_o;
Miroku: What?
Me: *pats Miroku on the head and shakes her head* Just sit there and look pretty, Miroku.
Miroku: -_-;
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I digress, again. I'm in a goffy writing mood today. ^_^ Anyway, back to the scavenger hunt; which we are going to win, by the way...
O_O! Ok, shoo! I was starting to wonder why I had that little article of lingerie... a free sample. *sighs in relief*
Inner self: I'm surprised, I figured you be modeling them for the extra credit.
Outer self: O_o; My inner self is a... hentai?
Inner self: Duh!
outer self: O_o; I am having a conversation with myself! o_O;
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Anyway, where was I? Oh yeah, the scavenger hunt! Karl? A stuffed panda? What the heck? And then Saki just went a found one? lol Ice cream? The team I'm on isn't very focused, are they? lol
THe next item...Sesshy-pooh's fur. *rubs her hands together as she smirks dangerously* Sounds like fun! *glomps Sesshy* Let's play.
Sesshoumaru: *maintaining his normal neutral expression* Human, *raises his clawed hand dripping in poison* Did you say something about playing?
ME: *removes herself from Sesshy* Well, not if your going to be that way about it. *pouts* Geez, this fur thing isn't going to be easy, is it?
*takes a deep breath in shock* Saki? *narrows eyes* How DARE you say that Sesshy must die!? Melody should have let me attack her! :p lol
Uh oh! What happened to Karl? Oh no! Pia's team abducted him and are questioning him about the location of the black lace bra. Karl! You traitor! He caved under tickle torture? *hangs her head and shakes her head* Karl, I'm so disappointed. (I loved the whole Karl's death talk, while he was sitting right there, by the way!) He's luck I hit him over the head with a boulder, and not cursed him to be eternally attracted to Jaken and follow him around like a puppy! Hold on! I lifted a boulder? lol Karl's sacrifice will not be in vain! *checks Karls pulse* Shoo! we didn't break the no killing rule! ~_^ lol
Loved this chapter, and sorry I'm late in reviewing it! Also, sorry this is a bit long and stupid... *shrugs* I'm in a stupid mood, I guess. ^_^
On to the next chapter....
~**ssjprincess**~ | Reviewed By: Kinai On: June 07, 2003 07:41 CDT
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Thanks. Finally I know what is a Mary-sue fic.
Overall funny fic.
Kinai. | Reviewed By: Alicia-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sprawled out on the floor dead of laughing* | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great idea for a fic! Not to mention the number of people that actually NEED to take these courses, it's mind numbing! I can't even begin to tell you how many fics leave me banging my head against the screen and throwing my keyboard against the wall! O_o; Hmmmmmm... maybe I need a few anger management courses myself. ~_^
I liked the chapter devoted to Kikyo Basher's. I'm not a big fan of Kikyo myself. I mean everytime Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship seems to be going somewhere, BAM there she is! *growl* Stupid, Kikyo! Geez, she made of clay and mud for Kami's sake! O_o; Hmmm... in a way she's like a walking pinata... *smirks maliciously and grabs a big stick* I wonder if I hit her if candy will fall out? ^_^
Loved, the kidnapping of Sesshy-wesshy-poo. *looks around nervously to be sure an irate demon isn't around to hear her say that as she holds on to her neck* Don't feel like being decapitated today, so ummm... don't tell him I called him that. ^_^
I know a class that needs to be taught at OFURT. It deals with the dreaded Mary-Sue's, otherwise disquised as Self-Insertion fics! I'm sure there's some good ones out there... I hope there's some good ones out there, but I have yet to run across one. *shudders* That character is always a mysterious girl, with a mysterious past, with a mysterious secret. Is anyone catching a pattern here? How mysterious can one person be for pity's sake?! Ugh. Not to mention one of the lead characters always falls for them and wants to help them through. O_o; You just want to scream, "Run, you moron! Kick her in the temple and run for your freakin life!" *is breathing heavily as a vein is popping on her forehead* Sorry, I got a bit worked up. But you see there is a need for the class. It could be called 'Self-Insertions: Friend or Foe'. Most definitely Foe! It's the Fouliest Form of Foe! Say that three times fast. lol ^_^
Another one, Kouga needs to teach a course. He needs to teach the students that he doesn't run around saying woman and my woman all the time. I just recently read one where he did that. Talk about annoying.
Another face I'd like to see is Naraku. Hehehe.. I got an idea, he can kidnap the student out on a field trip in a bid to extract his revenge for the horrible ways they've portrayed him in fics! Like the ones that have him become a sex fiend intent on taking Kagome for his perverse pleasures. O_o; Now how OOC is that? Though, I have to admit that I can handle that scenero as long as long as he doesn't start sproying words of affection towards Kagome. *shudders* And yes, I've read one of those. Why I read all the way some of these stories I don't know... it's kind of like a train wreck, you just can't turn away from it. The only difference is that after you read an atrociously written fic, you feel really bad with yourself and want to send a dictionary and lessons for 'THe Basics of Writing Stories for Novices' to the author! ^_^
Egads! Sorry this was so long. *looks sheepish* I guess I started and couldn't stop. I wouldn't mind being in this fic, but since this is so long, (I wonder if it will all show up in the review box)I won't leave my info. Maybe, if you wouldn't mind, you could email me the info you need and I'll send it back to you.
Again, I am enjoying this fic and can't wait for the next installment.
~**ssjprincess**~
ssjprincesss@hotmail.com | Reviewed By: little miss crazy On: August 07, 2003 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BAD BAD! U VERY BAD BAD! BAD! UR EVIL!!!! I HATE CLIFFHANGERS!!! IM SO GONNA GET U! I KNO WHERE U LIVE!!! (hahaha not realli jus bein a dork)WATCH OUT IM AFTER U!!! U BETTA HURRY AN CONTINUE!!!! kz. byez. betta im more often too. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Jen of the Wildfire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 21:02 CDT
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Oh, I'll be in it!
I'll be Urufuakki(my Inuyasha character that I have yet to write stories about), female half human, half wolf demon.
Clothing: samurai armor, but weapons left at home.
Appearance: in "humanoid form"...looks human except for golden eyes, clawed hands, and grey wolf ears and tail. in "demon form"...huge grey wolf. On the night of the full moon(since she's half demon)...becomes fully human, with black hair, but keeps the golden eyes.
Personality: somewhat serious, but obsessed with getting the Shikon no Tama. Can be friendly only with those she considers equals. On the night of the full moon...friendly with just about everyone, as if she forgets that she's half demon.
"violation": OOC-ness -_-;; | Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:12 CDT
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teachers are all alike, even the anime ones. Taking the student's dorms like that... i knew it would happen^^
and are you going to go into more detail on the green gooze thingy peoples? im still a little confused on that, like how Happosai went from being in a cardboard box to a gooze zombie. But then again it *is* Happy we're talking about here... nevermind. Anyways i love this idea and some of it's so funny! Cant wait for the next update | Reviewed By: Thundercat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yami Yugi from Yu-Gi-Oh! teaching ancient history? I see Lot of writers go get important historical facts like fashion, food and customs
wrong. Seems like they don't even bother to do some reserch on Ancient Japan or Egypt or whatever era they set thier stories in.
I'm planing on writeing a Yu-Gi-Oh! fic but before I do that I'm makeing sure I have my facts strait.
If yer Not famliar with him
e-mail me at webmaster@xevolution.zzn.com
Sess aka Fluffy could teach Martial arts and fencing! Most people who write fight scenes
don't even know the proper names of the moves and techniques of the moves they describe. And they don't even know the names of the wepons they use.
Kade could teach chemistry. She could teach realistic but cool "spells" like how to make stuff glow in the dark or how gun powder is made.
Or how to make your own medicine
But don't get me wrong "Made up" spells are fun too. I just think makeing stuff like gun powder and medicne would be more *useful*. | Reviewed By: Shiina On: February 25, 2003 11:28 CST
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its really funny, i hope you update soon, i really want to see more! | Reviewed By: Anna (nu_chan@hotmail.com) On: February 23, 2003 17:05 CST
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MWAHAHAHA! This is just too great! This fic is a real treat for the Takahashi manga obsessed. I should know; I'm one of 'em! I love this fic already. The idea of all the characters teaching bad writers is so funny and very origional.
Some of the things in this fic made me almost want to die laughing. The "lingerie modeling" class with Happosai, the "Ranma dorm debate," and the whole Sesshoumaru discussion were hilarious.
So far, this is very well written, and I can't wait for the next chapter. | Reviewed By: Dark_Phoenix_of_Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 18:46 CST
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I think Akane and Kogome should teach-- Names and Places 101,
Ranma and Inu-Yasha should teach-- Attacks and Special Techniques 101 | Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 11:11 CST
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lol, i love this idea. some people really could use this... who gets stuck with the wrong lemons one?
hopefully not miroku or happosai. havent read Urusei Yatsura, but this should be interesting anyways. | Reviewed By: Eclipse On: March 23, 2003 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This story is great so far and pretty funny! Can I pleeeeeaaassseee be in it?! If so I'd like my name to be Eclipse Meagie and I'd like to be in some of your classes with you! Email me at wolfenaalue@yahoo.com with your decision!Thanks
~Eclipse ^.~ | Reviewed By: Eclipse On: March 23, 2003 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This story is great so far and pretty funny! Can I pleeeeeaaassseee be in it?! If so I'd like my name to be Eclipse Meagie and I'd like to be half wolf demon. I'd also like to be in some of your classes with you! Email me at wolfenaalue@yahoo.com with your decision!Thanks
~Eclipse ^.~ | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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