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| "The Official Fanfiction University of Rumiko Takahashi!" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: RandomPirate On: January 30, 2004 20:31 CST
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Well, it' been a while since I've reviewed. Nice to see you've been updating. And it's so amusing, although... poor Kouga... *sigh* He does get the crap roles, doesn't he? Alas... I've been running around, trying to find decent fanfiction with him in it, and have only found a few *eyes begin to water* Loved the Mary Sue creature. Entertaining, that one, in an I-want-to-go-drown-myself-in-a-toilet kind of way. Will this be updated? I hope so, seeing as how their school year isn't even completed yet, but hey, who am I to talk? I haven't updated some of my own stuff in so long I've got people e-mailing me to check and make sure I'm not dead. Pathetic, isn't it? Anyhow... nice going with the miniature Sesshoumaru, um, things floating around. There really should be "Fluffy" one. I've seen so many, many people call him that, it's lost its humor... slightly. But yes. Nice going, great developement so far, and hope you get the next bit up soon!
| Title: Update
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must update or I kill myself. THEY NEED TO KILL KIKYO THEY DO HOE COULD YOU TELL THEM TO NOT KILL HER...WHY DID THEY AGREE WHY....
| Reviewed By: residentevilgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fic is really good. ^_^ I can't wait to read the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: lil miss crazy On: October 23, 2003 01:28 CDT
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GUESS WHOOOOO!!!! yea yea! u guessed it! waahhh!!! sesshoumarusama!!!! sorrie hahah!!! i lub it! jus alil bit of tha spellin. otherwise perfect! I WANNA READ MORE!!! U HAFTA WORK FASTER THEN THIS!!!! oki well ill talk ta ya some other time on aim or somethin! bye!
| Title: Compressed review
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 07:03 CDT
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Sorry, but the spaces didn't show uo in my review! *sigh* So it's a bit shoved together... sorry. ~ssjprincess~
| Title: Long Time No Review-Chapter 16
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 07:00 CDT
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ugh! Sorry, I haven't reviewed for so long, I think I was mistakenly sucked up in Miroku's wind tunnel or something. Miroku: Mistakenly? O_o ssjprincess: Uh...yeah. You wouldn't do it purposely, would you, Snuggle Bunny? Miroku: O_o;; Snuggle Bunny? *sighs as he begins walking away pinching the bridge of his nose* I think I have a class to teach, a female to proposition, or something.... ssjprincess: Don't forget we have a date tonight. *smiles* Miroku: You are aware that you stalking me around the campus does NOT constitute a 'date', right? *shakes his head and continues on, mumbling about looking into restraining orders* *smiles at you* Anyway, on to the review, ne? Nice to see that the Kikyou-bashers anonymous meetings are working out well. *lol* So many plans....so many failures. *sighs* Hmmm... I wonder, has anyone tried a simple glass of water? It seemed to work on the wicked witch of the west....so maybe it would work on Kikyou, The Wicked Witch of the Sengoku-Jidai? :D Poor, poor, Cait. She had to eat Akane's food....repeatively. I think maybe she should get her stomach checked. Undoubtedly, it has ate through the lining of her stomach at some point. That was too cruel to be a final. lol Archery class. Kikyou. *growls and looks around* Where's a glass of water when you need one? Uh oh! Cait got in trouble. I wonder what she will have to do at this 'special target practice'? Cait, be careful! She probably wants to add you to her dark minions! She wants to make you one of her walking dead! Run! Run far away! Run and don't look back! *looks around* Um.... yeah.... ;) Ah! I see. THAT'S what's so special about Kikyou's target practice. Run girls, run! *lol* That will teach them to pay attention. Well, I'm finally all caught up! Great chapter, by the way. Can't wait for the next one! I have to sign off now, got to get ready for my date with Snuggle Bunny- *Cherry pops in and slaps a charm on her forehead then pops back out* O_O What the- *feels forehead* Does Sesshy-Wesshie Pooh, find this truly necessary? How am I supposed to stal- um.. go on my date with Snuggle Bunny? *Cherry pops back in with two more charms, realizing ssjprincess already has one on her forehead slaps the two charms on her mouth, then pops back out* O_O!! Mmmummbummd!!! *waves bye to you* ~ssjprincess~ ooO(Hurry with that next chapter)Ooo
| Reviewed By: RandomPirate On: September 06, 2003 03:23 CDT
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Ah! I see you have finished it! Excelent. THen I will be able to read it all without interruption! Whoo hoo! So, disregard all the adding me in stuff! *blushes again* So far it's excellent! (I haven't finished reading the thing) Poor Sesshoumare-sama! Although, I prefer Fluffy myself... hehe. I love the Ranma-Akane thing going on! it's great. And their fathers... that was even more great. You should write a sequel! YEAH! A sequel would rule! Htye have many Harry Potter books about a school situation... yeah. But what would be the plot? Maybe new characters... or maybe Cait has a relapse and has to go back? Or maybe halfway through their summer break or whatever they get a notice saying that the faculty has decided to make it a two-year instituion. So in order to graduate, the students must return! That would be fun! Or are you already doing a sequel that I don't know about? ACK! I should check these things before I review! *wails and runs away* | Title: Master of disguise, manipulation, and the general and all-around stretching of the Truth and B.S.
Reviewed By: RandomPirate...again On: September 06, 2003 02:53 CDT
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I was sitting in front of my computer screen, musing over some things, and decided: What the hell. I'd review again. I can't believe you don't have more reviews! Maybe no one knows about this site or something. It took me a while to stumble across it, anyway. But it was well worth the wait, let me assure you. And yes, I'm writing this about five minutes after the last update. But that doesn't matter, because you need more reviews. It is simply unfair for you now to. So I'm going to do everything I can to remedy that! Ha! Haha! Ha. *cough* It's around 2 a.m. isn't it? Heh. Fun. *sigh* So, how 'bout them Broncos? Oh, and, um, d'ya think if you do decide to put me in, I could have done something remarkably stupid on the registration form and marked down youkai? Or is that too common? It's up to you in the end. (All bow down to the mighty MEOWM_!) Whee hoo!
P.S. Kikyo must die and STAY DEAD! That friggin undead WENCH! I HATE HER! I HATE HER! DIE!!!!!
Okay, I'm calm. | Title: Of the story? Or my own personal title for myself?
Reviewed By: RandomPirate On: September 06, 2003 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a member or anything, and apparently my real name is taken by soebody, so I'm using my writing alias. Just in case you needed to know...
I love what you do with the characters. It's really funny. Although... I've only read Inuyaha and a little bit of Ranma, so I get somewhat confused about some of the teachers. Oh well. I'll figure it out eventually. Great reaction from Ranma. Poor guy... or is it girl?...
Uh... *blushes* do you think that if you haven't gotten too many requests, I could show up? Or is the story finished already? (I reviewed chapter five or something like that without finishing the fic yet... I got impatient...yes.)
Yeah... if it's not too much trouble that is. If it is, or you have to many people or have finished the story, just ignore this next section!
Name: Nikki. Erm, my favorite character is Kouga, but it's more of a pining (is that spelled right?) *coughlustingcough* from afar kind of thing. He likes Kagome, and Ayame likes him, so I'm content *coughnotreallycough* to sit back. Yeah. *looks around for a few minutes* Do you need a physical description or something? Like brown hair, usually in a ponytail and blue eyes?
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As I said before, if you don't want to put me in then don't BUT I'LL HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOU PAY A THOUSAND DEATHS--NO! That's bad. I would NEVER do that... o.0 | Reviewed By: kitty demon On: June 28, 2003 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
AGH! too much waiting! isn't there anyway that you can hurry it up just a little? By the time you get the next chapter up summer will be over! | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 19:49 CDT
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I'm back! Hey! Don't run away!
Kouga: You have that affect on people.
Me: O_O! What are you doing here?
Kouga: *shrugs* Don't ask me... your the one typing creating your own bizzare universe, why I have to be a part of it is beyond me.
Sheesh! *typing*
Kouga: *leans over ssjprincess' shoulder reading* Huh? *disappears and reappears in the middle of the room* What are you typing?!
ssjprincess: I'll read it to you as I type the rest. *chuckles evily as she resumes typing* Suddenly, the area around Kouga grew dark causing him to look up to find the cause. His eyes widen in shock and disbelief, and before he had a chance to say anything a giant boulder landed on his cute, pony-tailed head.
Kouga: x_X
ssjprincess: Teach you to call my world bizzare! *clears her throat* Sorry 'bout that. I guess I haven't cured myself of my goofy reviewing today. *shrugs* I normally try to be a bit more serious, but alas, I just don't feel like it today! :P lol So, with that said, on with the reviewing.....
Well, it seems Karl made an excellent recovery from his injuries. He's back with the group, which is a good thing since Cait and he were the only ones that would go get Kikyo's bow! *mumbles something about a stupid priestess* Anyhow, Saki and I had to find Ranma's socks. lol I have one question, though..... you said we found everything except for the lingerie... you never mentioned how we got Sesshoumaru's fur. Awww... I would have been interested to find out HOW we managed that one! lol
What's this? We have Ryouga as a guide? That seems a bit counter-productive to me. lol Hmmm.. he blew up the walls, well, I guess it worked out after all. ^_^ *laughing* Oh no! Rain. lol Our cursed members of the team.... A freak and a pervert smasher. lol O_O! A thrown bookshelf! Karl, geez! lol Well, it seems the team is down to three since one member is currently out to rid the world of perverts (a shame I might add! lol), while the other is searching for.... *O_o;* world dominating...penguins? *blink* *blink blink* O....kay. *shrugs* I hope you find them, Saki. lol
Ok, maybe a silly question, but why is there a trail of fish shaped cookies? And why exactly do we know it's a trail from Pia's group? And more importantly, WHY ARE WE BLANTLY FOLLOWING IT? *bops the other girls on the head* Hello? We do realize it's going to be a trap...right?
*bops herself on the head* I took a bite out of that cookie? Well, that sure was a smart thing to do! Gee, maybe Pia has a poisioned apple she can give me while she's at it. ~_^
Paralyzed. I deserve it for being so darned gullible! *shakes her head* Ugh! Well, three down. That leaves Cait and Melody to succeed in the scavenger hunt. You go girls!
Dead fish? Poor Melody! It will take quite a few shammpoo's to get that stink out of her hair! lol The team isn't having much luck at the moment. One more down. That leaves just good ol' Cait to do the job.
We got all the items! *sticks her tongue out at Pia* What? All the member have to be present? Awww...
*Laughing* They won a week of detention! lol Thankfully Kodachi was in their group. ^_^ *laughing harder* Pia thought she was the winner just a moment ago, now her world is rubbing her face in the ground, so to speak. lol
Ranma is going to be in for a BIG surprise when he returns to his room! lol *Grins diabolically* Maybe... just maybe Akane will see it first!
Lum: *smirking and shrugging* I don't know 'who' sent that note saying that Ranma needed to speak with her about something serious in his room.
Me: That's just evil. *smile* Funny as heck, but soooo evil. lol
The prize was a bag of stale doughnuts? O_o; Well, I see the staff went to great expense for the prize. *rolls her eyes*
LOL! I kinda feel sorry for Pia. A green and pink striped Pia, at that! lol Run, Cait, run! It serves Pia right though.
Pia: O_O! What? *eyes twitching*
ssjprincess: O_O!! Eek! *runs off as well!
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Anyway, I'm glad I'm all caught up. Those chapters were great. I can't wait for the next chapter and the field trip. By the way, sign me up, I'm willing to go. Hopefully, I won't get paralyzed this time. lol
~**ssjprincess**~
or
Alexis the Immobile ^_^
P.S. Sorry this was so long.....again. | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:35 CDT
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Eek! I missed your last update! *bows head in shame* Sorry, but I have been swamped with Real Life stuff, darnit! *sigh* I was looking forward to this chapter, too.... Oh well, I guess I'll just have to read and review a bit late....
Now, let's see, where can everyone go for a field trip.... Hmmm... I know, they can go to the Jusenky and push Ranma and Akane in the 'Spring of a Drowned Man and Woman not Afraid to express his true feelings.' And while we're at it we can push Inuyasha and Kagome in as well! lol Or they can go to the Sengoku Jidai and spend some time roughing it as Inuyasha and the gang usually do. *shrugs* I can't think of anything too creative at the moment... On to the story....
You go Naruku! Tell it like it is, Mr. Cool-Tattoo-On-His-Back! It's not easy being a bad guy AND a mother of unrully offspring! O_o;; lol
Naraku: *sniff* I know! I tell you, you go and try and kill a few bothersim people and you get this bad wrap!
Me: O_o;; Ahhhhh....Naraku...you are evil....
Naraku: Not really, that's just the persona I have to portray for everyone else....*sigh* The real me is quite.... deep. I like to spend time reading Romantic novels by the fireplace, and fix little Kanna's pretty hair....*shakes head* I'm so misunderstood...
ME: *stares at Naraku as if he has sprouted another offspring right in front of her eyes* I am seriously disturbed right now! O_o;;
Naraku: All those evil deeds are just a cry for love and attention. And one more thing, Meowm_, Buyo is kinda.... sexy.
Me: *eye twitch*
lol
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Sorry. lol After that stupid exchange, I think I need another semester at the University! I think that undeniably is a definte case of OOC! lol
Ah! A scavenger hunt! Sounds interesting. No killing? *snaps fingers and looks crestfallen* There goes all the fun! *brightens up* Stealing, bribing, and blackmailing are okay! well, I guess that will make things interesting. There was no mention of maiming, hmmm... lol
Yay! I'm in the fic! Thank you! *bows then tightens the rope surrounding Sesshoumaru, Inuyasha, Miroku, and Kouga* Now, if you'll just give me these, I be your eternal slave!
Inuyasha: *raises eyebrow* Eternal?
Miroku: *waggles his eyebrows and smirks* I'm a slave.... A slave to love.
Everyone and me: O_o;
Miroku: What?
Me: *pats Miroku on the head and shakes her head* Just sit there and look pretty, Miroku.
Miroku: -_-;
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I digress, again. I'm in a goffy writing mood today. ^_^ Anyway, back to the scavenger hunt; which we are going to win, by the way...
O_O! Ok, shoo! I was starting to wonder why I had that little article of lingerie... a free sample. *sighs in relief*
Inner self: I'm surprised, I figured you be modeling them for the extra credit.
Outer self: O_o; My inner self is a... hentai?
Inner self: Duh!
outer self: O_o; I am having a conversation with myself! o_O;
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Anyway, where was I? Oh yeah, the scavenger hunt! Karl? A stuffed panda? What the heck? And then Saki just went a found one? lol Ice cream? The team I'm on isn't very focused, are they? lol
THe next item...Sesshy-pooh's fur. *rubs her hands together as she smirks dangerously* Sounds like fun! *glomps Sesshy* Let's play.
Sesshoumaru: *maintaining his normal neutral expression* Human, *raises his clawed hand dripping in poison* Did you say something about playing?
ME: *removes herself from Sesshy* Well, not if your going to be that way about it. *pouts* Geez, this fur thing isn't going to be easy, is it?
*takes a deep breath in shock* Saki? *narrows eyes* How DARE you say that Sesshy must die!? Melody should have let me attack her! :p lol
Uh oh! What happened to Karl? Oh no! Pia's team abducted him and are questioning him about the location of the black lace bra. Karl! You traitor! He caved under tickle torture? *hangs her head and shakes her head* Karl, I'm so disappointed. (I loved the whole Karl's death talk, while he was sitting right there, by the way!) He's luck I hit him over the head with a boulder, and not cursed him to be eternally attracted to Jaken and follow him around like a puppy! Hold on! I lifted a boulder? lol Karl's sacrifice will not be in vain! *checks Karls pulse* Shoo! we didn't break the no killing rule! ~_^ lol
Loved this chapter, and sorry I'm late in reviewing it! Also, sorry this is a bit long and stupid... *shrugs* I'm in a stupid mood, I guess. ^_^
On to the next chapter....
~**ssjprincess**~ | Reviewed By: Kinai On: June 07, 2003 07:41 CDT
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Thanks. Finally I know what is a Mary-sue fic.
Overall funny fic.
Kinai. | Reviewed By: Alicia-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sprawled out on the floor dead of laughing* | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great idea for a fic! Not to mention the number of people that actually NEED to take these courses, it's mind numbing! I can't even begin to tell you how many fics leave me banging my head against the screen and throwing my keyboard against the wall! O_o; Hmmmmmm... maybe I need a few anger management courses myself. ~_^
I liked the chapter devoted to Kikyo Basher's. I'm not a big fan of Kikyo myself. I mean everytime Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship seems to be going somewhere, BAM there she is! *growl* Stupid, Kikyo! Geez, she made of clay and mud for Kami's sake! O_o; Hmmm... in a way she's like a walking pinata... *smirks maliciously and grabs a big stick* I wonder if I hit her if candy will fall out? ^_^
Loved, the kidnapping of Sesshy-wesshy-poo. *looks around nervously to be sure an irate demon isn't around to hear her say that as she holds on to her neck* Don't feel like being decapitated today, so ummm... don't tell him I called him that. ^_^
I know a class that needs to be taught at OFURT. It deals with the dreaded Mary-Sue's, otherwise disquised as Self-Insertion fics! I'm sure there's some good ones out there... I hope there's some good ones out there, but I have yet to run across one. *shudders* That character is always a mysterious girl, with a mysterious past, with a mysterious secret. Is anyone catching a pattern here? How mysterious can one person be for pity's sake?! Ugh. Not to mention one of the lead characters always falls for them and wants to help them through. O_o; You just want to scream, "Run, you moron! Kick her in the temple and run for your freakin life!" *is breathing heavily as a vein is popping on her forehead* Sorry, I got a bit worked up. But you see there is a need for the class. It could be called 'Self-Insertions: Friend or Foe'. Most definitely Foe! It's the Fouliest Form of Foe! Say that three times fast. lol ^_^
Another one, Kouga needs to teach a course. He needs to teach the students that he doesn't run around saying woman and my woman all the time. I just recently read one where he did that. Talk about annoying.
Another face I'd like to see is Naraku. Hehehe.. I got an idea, he can kidnap the student out on a field trip in a bid to extract his revenge for the horrible ways they've portrayed him in fics! Like the ones that have him become a sex fiend intent on taking Kagome for his perverse pleasures. O_o; Now how OOC is that? Though, I have to admit that I can handle that scenero as long as long as he doesn't start sproying words of affection towards Kagome. *shudders* And yes, I've read one of those. Why I read all the way some of these stories I don't know... it's kind of like a train wreck, you just can't turn away from it. The only difference is that after you read an atrociously written fic, you feel really bad with yourself and want to send a dictionary and lessons for 'THe Basics of Writing Stories for Novices' to the author! ^_^
Egads! Sorry this was so long. *looks sheepish* I guess I started and couldn't stop. I wouldn't mind being in this fic, but since this is so long, (I wonder if it will all show up in the review box)I won't leave my info. Maybe, if you wouldn't mind, you could email me the info you need and I'll send it back to you.
Again, I am enjoying this fic and can't wait for the next installment.
~**ssjprincess**~
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