| "Yamcha Makes A Wish!" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: 10 for originality and humor
Reviewed By: ss4gogeta On: August 05, 2015 07:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very funny story wish it was a little longer. The close
calls of Yamcha being eaten was great. Ending gets a 10 puar who
was supposed to take care of him ate him and he couldn't do
anything to stop it lmao.
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Title: Priceless!
Reviewed By: msissyburrows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2009 18:21 PST
Comment/Review:
OH! I wish I were an Oscar Mayer Weiner That is what I truly wish to be cause if i were a oscar mayer weiner everyone would take a bite of me! At least that is the way my high school science teacher used to sing it! Perv!!
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Reviewed By: 3oclock_Tangerine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 16:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never givensomeone a ten on originality before...of course I've never read a story about yamcha being turned into a weiner before and it is "Oscar Meyer" I remember because of the other song: *starts to sing* My bologna has a first name, it's o-s-c-a-r, my bologna has a second name it's m-e-y-e-r, I like to eat it everyday and something something I saaaaaaayyyyyy oscar meyer has a way with b-o-l-o-g-n-a! It was good, you should keep going with it, I hate it when you people get me hooked then leave it! -3oTan
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Reviewed By: Cerulean Rhapsody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 15:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OmG this has to be the funniest thing I've ever read... LOL! Why didn't you post this on FF.net? I know that I (Rhapsody from FF.net) would have reviewed it! Good job... |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 18:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bwahahaha! That was hilarious! Although I think it's Oscar Meyer (or something close to that anyway, I can't remember exactly). I gave you an eight on the spelling & grammer just because I saw a few typos and awkwardly worded sentences, but nothing major. All in all, I really enjoyed this fic. |
Reviewed By: Abby On: February 10, 2003 19:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was hilarious! done in by puar haha! :) |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 10:02 PST
Comment/Review:
oooowwwww, my stomach hurts from laughing so hard reading this story. this was a nice funny fic. is it over? cause i'd like to see another chapter of this. |
