"Feeding Ground" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: September 07, 2005 20:29 CDT Comment/Review: i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Title: F.G. Reviewed By: unamed On: May 07, 2005 12:27 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: You don't hve any spelling mistakes as far as I can tell. But you do have smoe missing spaces in there, you mite want to go back and check those. YOU HAVE TO COUNTUIE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: HA! ahhh..sigh Reviewed By: Haruroxmysox On: March 20, 2005 22:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! this was great man...loved the ending, i was laughin so hard...NICE ONE! haha..i cant stop laughin...LATER
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Reviewed By: death bich On: February 16, 2004 13:45 CST Comment/Review: YOU WILL ADD MORE OR I WILL KILL YOU MY SELF UNDERSTAND?
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Reviewed By: kitty-yasha On: July 06, 2003 10:09 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Really good. 'nuff said. |
Reviewed By: gothic anime bitch On: June 08, 2003 21:31 CDT Comment/Review: ok my whole nick name is the gothic anime bitch
spawned from the bouls of the underworld but trie
to fit that anyware i like the ending.it was cool
and if you couldent of guessed by mother gave me
that name.anyway update or ill hunt you down and
drag you to the pits of hell then you can meet my
sister ps no i never killed anyone....... yet |
Reviewed By: Maylar On: May 20, 2003 08:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: GREAT JOB!! |
Reviewed By: PixieStick On: August 06, 2003 13:57 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow! that was really.....sumthin! but i didnt really understand all of it lol. when did kurama turn back into Youko and then back to shuichi?? o well it was still really good ^_^. ending was funny!!! |
Reviewed By: Arise [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 10:02 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Loved the ending XD |
Reviewed By: LadyWolf On: February 06, 2003 22:10 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow this story was so great, please let me know if you do another one-shot to go with this one I really liked this story, it was totally, great!!!!!! |