| "broken hearts fulfilment" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: draven's_enigma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it says the last time you have updated is 2003, dont you think its time you were to update again. I want to know what happens next.
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Title: So sweet!
Reviewed By: Mic Mic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. What I find most confusing is the fact that Kagome almost acts like Inuyasha didn't even rape her and Inuyasha is acting the same way. Other than that I love the story. Poor Shippou was bored out of his wits...
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
update please i hate it when people don't update in a while and apparently you have done this too please write more i want to know how the story ends
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: kira/sarah On: March 11, 2004 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW! i love your fic. please continue.if you dont then i will stab you in your sleep! im crazy like that:-D
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Reviewed By: Relix On: February 04, 2004 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on! Update already!!
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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: December 28, 2003 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic. ive read others kinda like it but overall it was good. you should really continue.
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Reviewed By: Julie B On: November 22, 2003 02:12 CST
Comment/Review:
What will happen next? Please update as soon as possible.
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: DreamStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read this fic. for months now. This had to be the millionth time i have read it. Please i'm just dieing to read the next chapter. Me plus a lot of others. PLease hurry, i can't wait much longer.
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Reviewed By: Inu-lover On: September 29, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so far! Make the next chaptor a IY/kog *Lemon*
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Reviewed By: NekoYasha On: July 25, 2003 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic , very original and very inticing. Please update soon, cliffhangers are bad for my heart ^^ please oh please write more, you have a real gem goin here |
Reviewed By: Ahriman On: July 12, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didnt read this, but that many people cant be wrong. Goood job. |
Reviewed By: Videl On: June 01, 2003 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more its getting really good !!
but you should trie to put more decription in emotions and body acivity |
Reviewed By: zero On: May 25, 2003 07:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story can't wait for u to continue it |
Reviewed By: Terra On: March 24, 2003 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i think you should finish your story please |
Reviewed By: Meowm_ On: February 27, 2003 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is pretty decent. Your style of writing was good, and your speeling and grammer was great, I hardly spotted any errors. Creative... not very. I mean, being honest, I've probably read twenty other similar get-togethers like it. But it was still fun to read! I liked the part when Inuyasha was all-demon. Over all, this is pretty good. In your next update, why not have more about Sango and Miroku? And of course, more lemon. ^ ^;
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