"Bedtime Tales" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: The sleep-deprived one On: August 15, 2004 01:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I loved it! *applauds* It's great, I really love the ideas you come up with in one-shots, only complaint is that Kagome's style of narration is an abrupt transition in style and caused me a bit of a problem. Good work! T
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 14:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: hot damn, this was a really cool story
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Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 06, 2003 20:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ooooooooowwwwwwww!!!!
please make another one like this!!!!!!!
I neeeeeeed to see a sequel!!!!!!!
pleeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!
p.s PLEASE MAKE A LEMON !!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sammie On: February 06, 2003 19:40 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: awwwww..that was cute! bedtime stories are kool! lol -sammie- |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 06, 2003 18:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal! Sequal!
That was far too open for a one-shot! What happens when she wakes up?
(Please make a lemon) |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 14:53 CST Comment/Review: hehehe...that was so sweet....KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!
Allie |
Reviewed By: Gingersnap On: February 12, 2003 19:58 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: so sweet.... very nice.... |
Reviewed By: Neko-Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 16:18 CST Comment/Review: I must agree with everyone else. That was too open ended to be a one-shot. You MUST write more. |