| "Wanting..." Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this to be an interesting oneshot. Akito can be sweet when he wants to be.
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Reviewed By: tinytoonz [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD, CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!! ^_^ KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gapes* very nicely written... i loved that. that was the 3rd chapter, rite? so how come i cant see the first two? (i didnt realy them) anywayz, that was really reallu good. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gapes* very nicely written... i loved that. that was the 3rd chapter, rite? so how come i cant see the first two? (i didnt realy them) anywayz, that was really reallu good. |
Reviewed By: furuba_chic On: February 17, 2003 14:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! when are you gonna update! I LOVE this pairing ! more sexxy akiru yummy lemon-ness! PLEASE !
(evil grin) Tohru should protest a bit though. I don't think she'd be too willing to have sex with akito unless he seduce her or blackmail her or something hehehe :D |
Reviewed By: merrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVED IT! Akiru lemons are the best! ^O^
not bad for your first lemon :DX it was hot and heavy but i think akito would be a bit more rough on toru ^_- (he's got his charming manipulative side but there's also that sadistic rough side of him i love so much) anyways write more akiru ne! *the world could use more of it* :D |
Reviewed By: Sarryn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting story. I am interested in reading more. |
Reviewed By: Starlette_Akiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I know it was a bit less rough than Akito would be, don't worry...he gets very vicious later>D ne way...ch.4 is in progress right now, I'll be posting it when i can!:D |
