| "Mended Wing" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: Duo s luvergurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap!!! You have got to update ASAP! PLease! I love this story as well as Broken WING. Now the GW boys are back to normal! Yeah sexy Duo is his old self again!!!!!! Is Duo n Usagi gonna be together now that Mamoru is dead?!!! Oh well anyways thanx for such great stories to read! Bu bYez~
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 00:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting. plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is cool an all but u need to put broken wing here on mediaminner. plz update!
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Title: Uh, yeah...
Reviewed By: SCelestial On: November 19, 2003 19:02 CST
Comment/Review:
OKies, yeah, hi, author here. :waves:: If anyone is paying attention to these reviews, then you're in luck. I've stopped posting here at mm.org, because I had some problems signing in. You can find more of Mended Wing (unfortunately, it's still not done, but there are seven more chapters) as well as other work I've done at my website, The Celestial Library: http://sio.midco.net/sailorcelestial I've just moved to this location, so the finishing touches to get the site completely back up to par aren't done yet, but all of my fanfiction IS up. So go, leave me a review on my message board. If you don't pay attention to reviews, then you've missed out. ~~**Sailorcelestial**~~
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Reviewed By: Akina On: November 19, 2003 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story p please update soon
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Reviewed By: Prae On: July 18, 2003 17:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aren't you going to finish this story? It's been a year, and stateing this is the second of a trilogy, and not finishing any of them 'cept the first is a bit annoying.
I like you're style of writeing, and though at this point in the story i must agree that Duo is a wimp, I'm waiting for the day he actually get's Usagi (or someone else). |
Reviewed By: Aya On: May 13, 2003 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad to have finally found the rest of your fics after reading Broken Wing. Reading Mended Wing is a treat, and I really really hope that you fulfill your promise of a trilogy! I'm up through Chapter 7 right now, and I can't wait to see what you have planned. I'm VERY intrigued right now by the dark plot behind what's happening, as well as the hints you're laying down. All I can say is that I hope you update soon. Definitely am enjoying your storytelling and writing style...they make me believe that a GW/SM crossover really did occur! :) |
Reviewed By: sailormoon64 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT. I LOVE BOTH. I WANT MORE!!!!
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO POST AGAIN???
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Reviewed By: Chibi Mina On: May 07, 2002 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done...
It was a change from the norm ...
I would love to read more of this ..... |
Reviewed By: LifeSenshi On: April 26, 2002 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yep, all tens. I love your style--don't know why, just do. I didn't see any grammer/spelling mistakes (or mabey I was just to caught up in your fic to notice), and this fic is definitley original, especially the alternate personalities. And enjoyment factor...well, that's self-explanetory. I love this fic! It's even better than Broken Wing. (Well, duh...) Please update again soon! |
Reviewed By: ~epona~ On: April 17, 2002 23:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All right! Finally, ch. 7!! I usually don't leave reviews (don't know what ta say really), buuuut, since you asked so nicely ^-^ I love this series! *gives muse a get better bear lollipop* Hope this'll help a bit? |
Reviewed By: Heero/Darien lover On: November 27, 2001 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,
That was sooooooooooooo good, but do u have to torture me like that???. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED Broken Wing!!. It was TOTALLY AWESOME!!. I have planned to read all ur fanfics!!!. Oh, and please finish this story I love both Sailor Moon and Gundam Wing and I think I'll die of anticipation of the next chapters can't wait for the rest, write soon!!!. GREAT fanfic!!!.
Bye.
P.S- Keep writing the great stuff! :P |
Reviewed By: Rashaka On: October 04, 2001 03:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well... that was cool. Not as dramatic as the opening to Broken Wing, but still cool. I have to say, after reading your side-stories, I'm super-confused, even though this part was pretty straightforward, if mysterious. But I'm SOOO happy you said this was a trilogy! That's so much xover fanfic by you I'll eventually get to read! Whoo-hooo! later, Sabbie-chan! |
Reviewed By: Voogie On: October 15, 2001 19:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!! Finally! I've waited so long to be able to read this, and I have to say, it was well worth the wait! I love it! Please! I need more! |
Reviewed By: Meio-Sei No Musume On: October 20, 2001 23:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!! That's the past Setsuna, not the future one that sent Usagi to the Gundam Wing world in "Broken Wing"!!! The guys don't know that!!! Uh-oh......... MAJOR uh-oh....... Please write more!!!!! This is cool so far! Loved the part when they were all stuck in or by the tree!! |
Reviewed By: Meio-Sei No Musume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2001 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Now I get how the "Broken Wing Alternates" fit in!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Must continue!!! I wanna find out what happens!!! And where's Setsuna!!!! It's not nice to leave me hanging like that!! |
