| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saria [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have NEVER read a fanfic that has songs for the chapters. I wish I could do that. Cool. |
Reviewed By: Katzztar On: July 05, 2003 21:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahh I'm loving this story! The scenes with Jaken & Rin are tooo cute! |
Reviewed By: river On: July 05, 2003 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank-you for the chapter, I've been waiting!!! I love the humor, and the story is intriguing!!! Looking forward to the next chapter, it can't come soon enough! |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: July 05, 2003 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. your really talented writer. it's so cool that the chapter are long. and are very interesting. keep updating. and keep on trucking. it just get more interesting to read. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: July 05, 2003 17:32 EDT
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Oooohhhh! UPDATE! Or you will surely have hell to pay for. ^^; Heh. |
Reviewed By: jane doe On: July 05, 2003 02:29 EDT
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your update made my day. THANK YOU! i really don't mind how long you take writing this story b/c it's worth the wait. kudos to you to be able to juggle this w/ your reg social life and hope everything is going well for you =) |
Reviewed By: miara2003@yahoo.com On: July 04, 2003 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was just rereading this the other day and hoping you hadn't left off writing it, and now this. Wow. It's just ... wow. That's all I can say. It was worth waiting for.
More, soon, please.
And don't worry about the OC's. Sometimes, a story just needs them, and as long as you avoid writing Mary Sue, it's usually OK (fwiw, I was worried at first that Aya would be a MS, but you seem to have avoided that trap quite nicely). The only criticism I could have is that the character's ways of expressing themselves seem a bit uniform (ie sengoku Sesshoumaru would probably never think "Great", that's just too modern), but they are still very in character, which is a refreshing change from most fanfics (same example, I can so see him thinking that his hand now stinks of hanyou ;).
More, soon, please. Should I cut and paste that a few more times?
Bonus review: I really liked your Yuka story too. I look forward to seeing more of them. Dating can be such a nightmare, and I think I may actually know Luke *grin*. |
Reviewed By: Shisou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 13:40 EDT
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*blink* I.. *blink* Wow. I think I need to read this chapter again. Yes, I'm sure I do. The end of it.. very well done. I'm going to be even more alert for your next update. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful fic. |
Reviewed By: TaY On: July 04, 2003 11:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read this story once before when you firsdt posted it but i am glad I have stumbled across it again to fins out hings are still progressing nicely...i loved it before and I still love it now.... |
Reviewed By: lisa On: June 26, 2003 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha. this is amazing. enough said. |
Reviewed By: sesshyangel On: June 13, 2003 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was always my fav chapter. This used to be in fanfic though you never updated it anymore.
What's that thing you mentioned earlier about giving children free something bought by the govt?
Also, is the chapter titles here diferent? i seem to have aproblem matching them up. I can't remember where I left off. I guess I'll be rereading then.
Great, outstanding job by the way! |
Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 16:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
looking forward to more...really enjoying your humor! |
Reviewed By: blackjack kat On: April 20, 2003 10:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love this fic, it's funny, romantic and it's got action. I can't wait for you to add more. |
Reviewed By: Niki On: April 26, 2003 02:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
Update...Update...Update...Update...Update...
Update...Update...Update...Update...Update...
Update...Update...Update...Update...Update...
Update...Update...Update...Update...Update...
Update...Update...Update...Update...Update...
Update...Update...Update...Update...Update...
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
What's taking so long? When you put out that side story...which by the way was halarious...wrong on so many levels, but never the less, hilarious...you said the chapter was almost done. It's been a couple weeks since then, and still no update!! So I'm begging you *gets down on knees* PLEASE UPDATE!!! *gets back up off floor* I really wanna know Kag's reaction to the whole mother thing, and I wanna read about her training and new kick ass moves *winks*... so please...one last time I ask of you...UPDATE!!!!! Well, until next time... Ja ne!!! |
Reviewed By: yayforfluffy On: April 17, 2003 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Kag/Sess fics I have read, and is definitely the most original. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please post it soon! PLEASE!!! |
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