| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: claudia67g On: March 12, 2003 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
`and the award for weirdest single-parent of the year goes to. . .'
/cough
hahahha
this is sticking in my head LOL
and there is more onliners i enjoyed.
I think you are doing a great job, i hope your mind contiunes with inspiration.
/bless with inspiration.
I want to read an update WEEKLY!!!!
hehe
claudia
/coolnees factor = 10 rock on |
Reviewed By: li wei On: March 12, 2003 19:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! i think i can honestly say that this is my favourite inuyasha fic! you are very talented! so update soon ne? |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 11:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I quite liked the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Aya is an interesting mystery and to think she is not a little sister after all. I can't wait to read more, especially the modern time scenes.
Hang in there!
~Eri |
Reviewed By: shadypony On: March 12, 2003 10:49 EST
Comment/Review:
My my my this is quite a story you have here. I enjoyed what you have so far very much. You also are very quick with the updates and new chapters. I hope to read more soon. I love it.
\\V//
^_^. Love and Peace
SHADY |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 11:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please don't give up, this is the only S/K pair I like please continue |
Reviewed By: =) On: February 28, 2003 16:19 EST
Comment/Review:
wow! this is great! this story just gets better and better ^_^ hahaha i can't seem to stop myself from reading when i start and no the time change doesn't bother/confuse me. can't wait for the next chapter!! hee hee i wonder which sweet food will set them off again...hahhahaa |
Reviewed By: Mae_Aloril [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 01:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, this is one of the best fics Ive found yet.. definately in my top ten.. five even. You style of writing, language and sardonic wit is refreshing. Id call it almost Daria-esque, but you definately have your own way about it. Its way ooc but thats completely overlookable..I wonder if thats even a word. In any case, please hurry and continue! I cannot wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 10:59 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Teaser is great, Volpa. I was waiting for the next present time installment! I can't wait for the real deal! |
Reviewed By: HI On: February 23, 2003 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it though I am a little confused with the two worlds, like how come Kagome not remember Sesshomaru from the past and how does he go back in time too? Also, what happened to Sango, Miroku, andShippou? It's a really great story though, I'm just a little confused maybe u can clear that up in the next chappy though. :) |
Reviewed By: Me.. On: March 11, 2003 13:04 EST
Comment/Review:
HEY!!! I haven't seen the l8est chappie at ffnet....why???
anyways, it's really quite a shock to think that Aya is Seiji's mom.....and Kazuo is her dad? or husband? hmm.....What a shock |
Reviewed By: Mala On: February 21, 2003 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fic alot, Keep updating!!! |
Reviewed By: Emma_D [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 11:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. this is really cool... your a cool writer so you better write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Nicole (otherwise known as SilverQuick on ff.net.) On: February 16, 2003 16:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The amusement of this fic abounds. I love the humor. Chirpy McSqueal.. hehe, god I laughed. I got a literal kick out of the kiss scene. And then they pulled back after the hot steamy mind shattering kiss and... "How is your wound." It just ammused my immensly for some reason. This has become one of my favorite fics. Right up in the top 9. ::nods:: I lookd foreward to more. |
Reviewed By: Obscured On: February 09, 2003 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story you've got going here. 10's all the way.
Please don't give up on this fic I'd really like to see where you go from here.
Take care. |
Reviewed By: Lizzycat On: February 09, 2003 03:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is really good so far. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
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