| "Warrior's Intuition" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Lady-in-Purple66 On: October 11, 2009 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma. DX So I take it a "red wing" lemon is one where the hero comforts a heroine who's suffering as a result of the woman's curse. Well, good thing for Bulma, in that case, that Vegeta is a warrior and therefore doesn't mind blood from time to time. I guess all that's left to hope for is that Vegeta was right about Bulma feeling better in the morning instead of worse...
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Reviewed By: liz On: February 09, 2003 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story. very realistic and beautifully written. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: February 10, 2003 10:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Cute ^-^
eating a woman out when she has her period? hm I bet Bulma enjoyed it twice as much sinds she's twice a sensitive then =) |
Reviewed By: Sailor Optimal Optimus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 13:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Nicely written. Vegeta I knew wouldn't care about a little blood... |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its true we can't deny vegeta anything. lol what a great fic..all men need some of that warrior's intuition! lemony goodess=10. Great job! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 00:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was orignal and I loved it keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin no Oujo On: February 08, 2003 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man!! Vegeta earned his red wings!!! No one ever does a red wing fic! I was impressed! |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 07, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the hell can I say U RULE!!! U ROCK!! I love your fics u always think of something new original and fresh to write! it was great! Veggie loves blood so why dont give it to him *smirks* Cant deny him anything now cant we. :P
Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: February 07, 2003 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I always say a real man isn't afraid of a little blood..... |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 16:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm glad I'm not the only one who had this idea! Saiyajins... blood... mensturation... plus orgasms do help cramps! Heee! |
