Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
my goodness, this is beautiful ^-^ I love your word choices, and how you just drifted on short tangents explaining things that did not truely have to due with the story... it was like following Majic's thoughts, which can be bad and destracting in 3rd person works such as this but you made it work nicely. I loved how you described loose events from the anime as well. The over all idea in this was very cute as well, pure fluff ^-^ thank you for writing this, I enjoyed it greatly.
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