| "Accidental Confession" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kincses [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the cutest stories I've ever read! ^_^ Please update. I know you wrote end on it, but I'd like to see what happenes next.
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Reviewed By: SonVegetaUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 17:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done, not out of character at all! I would make two suggestions. One, there needs to be a bit more transition between the boys working on their project and diving into bed (plus this would give some fun opportunities for Jou to oggle Yugi...). Two, SEQUEL! Squee! You can't possibly just END there, there must be more! Sweetness! Kinky sex! *cough* Anyway, well done ^^
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Reviewed By: Ryasha On: June 15, 2003 19:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo. Definitely Sequel! Don't leave me hanging! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
That was interesting! Is this just a one-shot or are you going to add another chapter? Maybe have Yugi return Jou's feelings. |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 11:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was interesting.
Yugi: SEQUQLSEQUELSEQEULSEQUEL!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mystical Elf On: February 15, 2003 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderfully written story. I hope you post more to it! |
