| "Abuse This" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: cherrycheesehead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
revenge is always sweet.
James |
Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I was wondering when this fic was going to be updated again. I hope that Wufei is able to help Duo since 5x2 is one of my favorite pairings. I'm also looking forward to the possibility that all the pilots find out they slept with the same person at one point. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there hope? They fucked Duo up so bad....-sigh- Will the pilots find out they all screwed him? I'd love to see THAT. Whoa.... |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 04, 2003 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredably descriptive. Hope Duo gets the help and love he so despirately needs. |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
God, that was intense. I try to avoid NCS and heavy angst as much as I can but with this fic it's kinda like morbid curiosity. The plot and how you play it out is amazing; keeps the reader wanting more with each chapter you put out. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Solain Rhyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You finally updated! These two chapters were very good and worth waiting for. Please update again soon.... |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 14:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! The Dumb Ones finally figured it out!!! The detail and angst in this story is just amazing! I think this is my favorite Duo-angst for right now. You really have a talent. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I love the angst most of all!!! You don't know how glad I was when I saw the update!!! |
Reviewed By: Rachel On: February 23, 2003 13:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Really like this fic. Please update soon...I'm looking foward to how all the other pilots and Duo interact in closed quarters. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 05, 2003 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
God I'm hurting with Duo, Please help you morons. Good job writing. Can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: Lil Black Cat On: February 16, 2003 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that have a very interesting premise here, and that you should continue it. I think that you should focus on how Duo's experiences have warped his perception of the world around him. You really didn't mention it in the first chapter. Also, you seem to use more tell rather than show. For example, instead of Duo saying that he can't watch porn without throwing up, there would be a greater impact if you had him trying to watch pornography and then proceeding to throw up. Also, I wouldn't recommend mentioning any contemporary pop culture, it makes the story feel awkward. Other than that, keep writing, you're very good. |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*waves the flag* ahem! more more more! THis is a great start...though kinda a weird idea. But then, I read it, so maybe not so wierd, or maybe I'm weird...or maybe both. Anyhow, I really can't wait for more, so please hurry up? lol. |
Reviewed By: Amaris On: February 10, 2003 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
i like the idea, keep it coming |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! THANKYOU!!! You don't know how glad I am you reposted! This fic was on my favorites at FF.net, but it got deleted! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great. A nice original idea. Please keep posting it, I am going insane not knowing what's going to happen!!! |
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