| "Abuse This" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I love the angst most of all!!! You don't know how glad I was when I saw the update!!! |
Reviewed By: Rachel On: February 23, 2003 13:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Really like this fic. Please update soon...I'm looking foward to how all the other pilots and Duo interact in closed quarters. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Brat On: March 05, 2003 15:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
God I'm hurting with Duo, Please help you morons. Good job writing. Can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: Lil Black Cat On: February 16, 2003 10:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that have a very interesting premise here, and that you should continue it. I think that you should focus on how Duo's experiences have warped his perception of the world around him. You really didn't mention it in the first chapter. Also, you seem to use more tell rather than show. For example, instead of Duo saying that he can't watch porn without throwing up, there would be a greater impact if you had him trying to watch pornography and then proceeding to throw up. Also, I wouldn't recommend mentioning any contemporary pop culture, it makes the story feel awkward. Other than that, keep writing, you're very good. |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
*waves the flag* ahem! more more more! THis is a great start...though kinda a weird idea. But then, I read it, so maybe not so wierd, or maybe I'm weird...or maybe both. Anyhow, I really can't wait for more, so please hurry up? lol. |
Reviewed By: Amaris On: February 10, 2003 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
i like the idea, keep it coming |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! THANKYOU!!! You don't know how glad I am you reposted! This fic was on my favorites at FF.net, but it got deleted! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Arithkenshin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really great. A nice original idea. Please keep posting it, I am going insane not knowing what's going to happen!!! |
Reviewed By: Solain Rhyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant story.......I started reading it on FF.net but then it was removed. All I can say is that I thoroughly enjoyed it, please continue! |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! I just felt the heat from that one! Oh the anger! The fury! The dirty feeling!!! I felt it all! Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Brat On: February 14, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Nice writing. But I still hope for a bright ending. Someone help Duo PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oooh! I like! I'm kinda torn between wanting Duo to get hs revenge on the other GW pilots and not wanting him to, but if he does there's going to be a happy ending, right? *poke poke* RIGHT? I've never read a story like this yet so I hope to see the rest of it soon!
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Solain Rhyo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 17:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I think this is by far the best chapter yet. It made me cry, so that should give you a hint of how powerful it was. Please keep it up, I so very eagerly await the next update......... |
Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: March 16, 2003 07:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im so happy u updated ^_^ i hope you update as fast as you did b4. ive been cheking up every day. i thought this chapter was good. i still hope at the end he ends up with heero or wufei or something. i love angst stories like this but i like a happy ending if its not overly sappy. hehe so sue me no wait dont you wont get anything! WMAHAHA anyway good job update soon! |
Reviewed By: bandit-gurl42 On: March 11, 2003 17:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE SOON!!!! this is so good!!! Trowa was a jerk. i wished duo could have said some of the things he thought. Heero and Wufei seem to love him its sad but such a great story! |
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