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Reviewed By: Cat, Avatar for the DCG On: October 20, 2004 01:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A fun read. I enjoy R+1 fics immensly, perhaps because there are so very few of them. This nice little lemon had a bonus plot, delighting me to no end. That, and an amusing, sardonic, intellegent Wufei! I love that. I did wonder for a bit how they kept refering (or rather Heero did) to Relena using him even at that first time... But then I realized that if I ever get to the point where a crazed, sociopathic, teenaged, misanthropic male's reasoning made sense to me, I might as well pack it in anyhow. Fun stuff- read some of your work over at ff.net- keep up the good work, yeah? -Cat
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Reviewed By: SKISM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome Fic!!! It was actually the first one I've ever read for Gundam Wing!! ^__^ It was soo good! You are deffinatly a writer.
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Reviewed By: Crystalline On: May 04, 2004 22:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it. :D
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Reviewed By: ?????? On: April 02, 2004 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was un-freaking belivable. What a great story! :)
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Title: The best....
Reviewed By: Crystal Rose Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this fic a while ago. A long while ago. It wasn't done at the time (think it let off with Rel getting shot) and for some reason or another, I lost the site it was at. Well, imagine my joy when, on FF.Net, I find your bio and a link to the story. Since I found it again I must have read this fic three times through. It is, and will remain, one of my top three favorite stories of all times. I've read other work by you, this... this is the best.
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Reviewed By: [ArcaneFire] On: February 29, 2004 01:41 CST
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Bravo, well done.
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Reviewed By: Goddess Gin On: February 25, 2004 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story! I just couldn't get enough of it. It was great! Bye-ya! ^_~
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Reviewed By: [ArcaneFire] On: February 22, 2004 23:58 CST
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Well done, I can't wait to see what you have instore for them in the next installment.
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Title: lizabee
Reviewed By: lizabee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh! that was great!! i loved it!!
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Reviewed By: [ArcaneFire] On: February 20, 2004 01:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update soon. I would really like you to continue the series. Or, if you cannot update right now, could you let us know some kind of time frame in which we could expect an update?
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Reviewed By: ArcaneFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 13:16 CST
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I had read the fic "out of control" a while ago, and thought that it was very well done. What I was not expecting was to find a sequel to it that far surpassed it in humor, action, plot line, and character development. I find myself intrigued by this latest turn of events, and eagerly awaiting the next installment. Have you ever considered writing for yourself (meaning using your own characters rather then someone else's)?
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Reviewed By: Crystalline On: January 04, 2004 02:54 CST
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Well, first, thank you so much for continuing the story. This last chapter was excellent; not at all what I expected! As for the end of the chapter: ahhh! Already, I'm in torture, waiting for the next part. *grin* Keep up the excellent writing.
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Reviewed By: Dsiree On: January 02, 2004 03:20 CST
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OH MY GOD! in relen's words. I love ur story. please please please if u have it finished somewhere else let me know so i can read. If not then please hurry up and update. I LOVE UR FIC!!!
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Reviewed By: rayvnfire On: January 02, 2004 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!! how could you?? that evil evil cliff hanger... you have to update soon, please, please
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Reviewed By: Lynks On: January 01, 2004 20:18 CST
Comment/Review:
love this, please update soon! LiL Elf
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Reviewed By: Momma kitty On: January 01, 2004 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I bet he is naked. Or wearing something sexy. Using her tacics back at her. ^_^
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Reviewed By: lizabee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh ho! what's heero up to? can't wait for more!!!
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Reviewed By: MirroredSakura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 21:33 CST
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Amazing, I found this amazing. I found this fic on FF.net actually, and found the link here so I didn't have to read the censored version. Have to say, I was impressed. I like how you can add in the sex and still manage to inject humor at all opportune moments. More chapters! Please?
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Reviewed By: Lynks On: November 01, 2003 14:14 CST
Comment/Review:
hey! omg! please update!!! LiL Elf
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Title: chapter 9 review
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: October 30, 2003 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unbelievably wonderful and sexy. Even though I'm a huge Relena/Heero fan, Wufei and Relena's flirting is hot. At least I see flirting. ^_~
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 29, 2003 16:03 CST
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I hope this fic has a happy ending. Keep up the good job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 17, 2003 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. Wufei was both tantalizing and an unintentional jerk. Poor Wufei darn if he does, darn if he doesn't. LOL! Update soon and keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: lizabee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2003 08:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was agreat chapter! i can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 02, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I liked this chapter... but I'm not sure. |
Reviewed By: mamasama On: August 30, 2003 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great chapter . i liked howthey sort of talked about it and worked it out |
Reviewed By: Trai Boreanaz-Hunter On: August 20, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again ill say it...freakin amazing! please keep posting! |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: August 20, 2003 02:34 CDT
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It happened again!I hate it when you go to submit it delay's and you press the button only to end up with 2 entries,sorry! |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: August 20, 2003 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally read non-yaoi stories but this one had so many reviews I read them and then read the story.They were right.This was really good and
it's not often Relena is a character I like.(It's not her but the way people make her out to be.)I love Heero as the 'woman-like' character and how Wufei was 'a girl's best friend' giving advice and a helping hand.Not to metion all the joke's he made and up front attitude.This was done very
well,good work!
Why then did I give the overall rating a 2?Because I was tried of seeing tens everywhere...you're making me jelous.;) |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: August 20, 2003 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally read non-yaoi stories but this one had so many reviews I read them and then read the story.They were right.This was really good and
it's not often Relena is a character I like.(It's not her but the way people make her out to be.)I love Heero as the 'woman-like' character and how Wufei was 'a girl's best friend' giving advice and a helping hand.Not to metion all the joke's and up front attitude.This was done very
well,good work!
Why then did I give the ovrall rating a 2?Because I was tried of seeing tens everywhere...you're making me jelous.;) |
Reviewed By: Crittle On: August 18, 2003 22:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wahahaha! I love this story! |
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