"Executive Orders" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: ***** On: February 16, 2003 09:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Go Relena! Go find Heero and show him whose boss.
This story has everything. Hentai, romance and comedy. All perfect combinations. ^o^ |
Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: February 15, 2003 18:49 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Heh, heh, heh! Only Relena would still keep her pervert personl assistant. So nutty. |
Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: February 15, 2003 18:15 CST Comment/Review: *Fans self* HOT, HOT, HOT! HOPE THIS STORY HAS A LOT OF CHAPTERS. JUST ONE IS DEFINITELY NOT ENOUGH! |
Reviewed By: Jason On: February 15, 2003 17:38 CST Comment/Review: Damn, that was off the hook! All I can do is shake my head and blush. What's Relena going to do with that disk? And is there more disks with the other GW pilots? It would be hilarious to read more. As for Heero...Poor Heero doesn't stand a chance. |
Reviewed By: lizabee On: February 10, 2003 15:41 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i can't wait for more of this !! Woo hoo! go get 'em Relena!!! lol!! |
Reviewed By: A.C. Galloway On: February 10, 2003 17:10 CST Comment/Review: More, more, more! I need more of this. It was great and a good laugh. |
Reviewed By: Gram-Kracker On: February 10, 2003 18:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: If this stories gonna be a series of chapters, then I'll be definitely back for more. A definite orginal idea! |
Reviewed By: Ju On: February 11, 2003 14:15 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Oh, you gotta write more. That first chapter was all that. Funny and smart. |
Reviewed By: Seak5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 16:23 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was fantastic! I loved the porno scene can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: hitomi On: February 11, 2003 20:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, yeah. I'll be checking for more chapters to come. *snickers at the porno scene* |
Reviewed By: Ju On: February 21, 2003 18:44 CST Comment/Review: Absurdly hilarious. New found admiration for Relena! What a clever sneak. Now she better put those handcuffs to proper use or I'm gonna start foaming at the mouth. |
Reviewed By: Kiki On: February 10, 2003 16:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, my God! Hilarious and sick and I loved it. Especially Relena's reaction to it. Perfect. |
Reviewed By: Big Gay Al On: February 10, 2003 16:23 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was the best! I'm dying for more of this. It was the bomb. |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: February 10, 2003 16:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Damn funny. Just the thought of a porn tape with actors palying Relena and Wufei... My goodness!
^_^ |
Reviewed By: hitomi On: February 21, 2003 21:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: DAMN! Hot chapter as great as the first. Well, she did say she'd get her man! HAHAHAHHAHA! -_~ |
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