| "A Lover's Pain" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Grey Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whats going to happen next? Bandages don't stay on for a month after lacerations or whatever the injuries...did Noin's face REALLY suffer any kind of damage?
I'm developing a strong dislike for Mitchell! |
Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 08:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting very interesting when are the other Gundam Pilots or Trowa going to be re-introduced into the story?
Either way I look forward to chapter 7!!! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 11:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've just read the next chapter ^_^. Like I said it's really unlike you or something like that, but I agree that chapter was short. It was really light hearting or something like that since the last chapter was almost impossible to believe that she's going to die ^_^.
I repeat again...
please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will Noin pull through?
Whats going to happen now?
I look forward to chapter 5. |
Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noin is obviously going to come out alive.
What happens to her?
Is she seriously injured?
Does she temporarily lose her memory?
I can't wait until the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 19:54 CST
Comment/Review:
^-^ Hehehe... I'll review!!! Was I right about my guess, I hope so... because most of my guesses when it comes to love in anime are true.. if not, ::face fall:: then I've to read on.
Anyways, that was a nice chapter too ^-^.
GREAT WORK!!! I'll check up on the next few chapters of your "A killer's instinct" fic, okay?
=^_^=cin |
Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could Zechs be such a b******! Insensitive Jerk!
Yay Trowa! That sarcastic congratulations was well justified!
Looking forward to chapter 3! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll review!! I like it! I hope you got my notes too.
The style was great. Like I said, I like the flow of your story. Quite sad that this is just one chapter :(.
I've checked your grammar already, so I'll not rate that one. It's not bad though. But since I'm your beta-reader I don't have to rate that I guess.
This is quite original. I can't even think about writing something like this ^-^ like I said... NICE WORK HERE.
I've really enjoyed it. I like it of course even though I'm just your average 6+9 fan. But anyways I can also be a rabid fan too.
Keep it up!! =^-^= |
Reviewed By: Miss Kissranada [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 07:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I am mostly a shounen ai Gundam Wing fan, but somehow I am oddly intrigued by your story. I like how you described Noin's feelings and the ending makes me eagerly wait for more.
Loved how Une raised her glass by the way^^ |
Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this, I take this is going to be a 1x9 am I right?
Anyway I look forward to the chapter ^_^, this is great! I really do mean it! |
