| "Delicate Butterfly" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: vashette [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2006 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! I did expect Legato to do that, but not for your charater[the person you made up] to. I also think that you did a great job on making Vash a bit more sincable in braking the promise. Too bad though, you could have made a part 2.[I don't know if you did bacause this is the first time I have read any of your stories.] But... You killed Brightmen! How mean!
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good story. **SPOILER: Don't read this rvw if u haven't read the story.* I enjoyed the surprise of Vash being a dad. It was interesting how the child grew into adulthood overnight. I could really picture the story as if I was watching it; which was great. I would not rate this hentai; it was more of a lime. There were few spelling/grammar errors, but overall it didn't really affect the story. It kept my interest from beginning to end. Luv'd it *_*
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Reviewed By: Ophelia Revived On: June 04, 2004 15:23 CDT
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This seemed like it was a good fic, but I could not see past the poor use of the English language. The story has potential, but try finding someone who can read and edit the chapters.
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: fangirlofiunyasha On: January 25, 2004 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Kissy On: June 30, 2003 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow....... i'm speechless. it's reallie good. though the ending was reallie sad. it's just... u went from an abusive legato 2 an very gentle luving legato and the ajustment was very rough. it would b nice it u could make the transaction a lil more smoothly. cuz 2 me it legato went from wanting 2 own Aerith 2 luving her. and i got confused. all in all i enjoyed ur fanfic |
Reviewed By: Sh4d0w On: March 11, 2003 21:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its perfect I love it, but please up date it please, because the curious is killing me.... |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooh violence yummy...I still want to know what Inu Yasha Has to do with it. |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got done watching Trigun and I like it a lot...but it says that this is a Inu Yasha Trigun fic where is Inu Yasha |
Reviewed By: Angel Divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHEHEHE! Great job Hikari!WRITE YOUR YU-GI-OH ones on this site too! HEEHEEHEEHEE Ciao 4 now!! |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Ooh! I like this. It's very intruiging. I can't wait for more! :) |
