| "Forever Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 20:44 CDT
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YOU ARE SO EVIL!!!!!! YOU SHOULD TOTALLY CONTINUE THIS STORY.
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Reviewed By: tochi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2005 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story wasnt bad at all! u shouldnt critisize yourself! i though it was great for a first try.
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Reviewed By: chibi_strawberry_kisses On: October 02, 2005 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It' s very cute indeed. I love your little intend pun at the end with Kagome and the sales clerk. Kagome is a naughty little girl. *laughs* Perhaps look out for the grammatical errors that seems to occur on rare occasions. Spelling was not that bad but could be improved. The style of writing is VERY cute and unique, shows the writers prespective well instead of having plain words making up a line, i can FEEL the meaning of your sentences that you portrayed through the two characters you chose. Good work!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2005 13:23 CDT
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cute.lemon was rushed though.i almost couldnt understand it.
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Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: April 14, 2005 22:34 CDT
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My favorite line - "It's huge! It looks like it could take over the world!" I laughed my ass off at that one. It was a good first try, though the actual act could have been a little more umm... descriptive perhaps
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Title: Forever Yours
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 16:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: InuGirl13 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooh hooh!!! Pure hentai baby!! 0_o' OOOkk Now ya'll think I'm weird buutt.. that was great!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: September 23, 2003 18:51 CDT
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Cute! Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Kell On: February 19, 2003 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
you need to slow it down a little. and watch the OOCness, ok? |
Reviewed By: Somebody Else [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 15:11 CST
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-_-;; just because you don't have a plot doesn't mean you can throw the charicterization. The lemon was well written enough, but it was severely OOC. |
Reviewed By: Honey's On: February 12, 2003 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great I enjoyed the fiction . |
Reviewed By: Steve Jester [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
9's across the board. The reason is that for a first time it's good. Hell for a first time it's really good. But it could get even better.
Steve Jester |
