| "Love's a Sneaky B@$t@rd (an off-beat love story)" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Soooo....next update?
Reviewed By: RavenPheonixFire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really creative fanfic. I don't think I've ever seen one between DBZ and Tenchi. I really like how you added Ryoko. She was probably one of my favorite characters from that series. I've been to your site and well I really hope you start this one up again soon. I know how life can get in the way of writing and the infamous writers block but this is one avid fan who's waiting on baited breath to read your next update. Please update soon. I love your writing. Ja ne, Raven
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Reviewed By: sexy-jess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 00:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like this fic so far! It's great! I'm angry at Chichi though, that is so mean! Oh well, all the better for Ryoko!!! I'm guessing that the girl who came with future Trunks was Ryoko and Goku's daughter? Hehehe. Keep up the excellent work! from sexy-jess.
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Reviewed By: Stephanie B. On: June 22, 2004 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, but you really should have longer chapters! That's the only problem, but I love the pairs. I have to ask, aren't Ayeka and Tenchi still alive since Juraians have longer lifespans? It'd be a great twist if they visited Ryoko (but she still ended up with Goku). I'll be waiting for the next chapter, please have a longer chapter soon!
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Title: MUST... HAVE... MORE...
Reviewed By: The Great Super Saiyan 5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the review title says it all. I knew that Goku would be better off with a different mate, but who woulda thought it would be Ryoko? Anyway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: LonelyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It's the best crossover fic that i've red in a long while, update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lady Aradia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story line allot. Makes you very curious and I long since have been a fan of your writing. The description of the surroundings might be improoved but other like that. No advice.
Keep it like it is please, and update SOON????
Ja'ne |
Reviewed By: optimus610 On: April 02, 2003 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm, not bad. So far you have a pretty interresting story. Hopefully you will keep everyone true to their powers and personalities. |
Reviewed By: timatheus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very interesting story, it has my favorite characters in both tenchi muyo and dbz. Please keep it up and update soon thankz |
Reviewed By: Qwik On: February 26, 2003 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, keep it up. |
Reviewed By: g-dogg On: February 18, 2003 20:57 CST
Comment/Review:
It's good but to freakin' short!!! |
