| "Why me?" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 15, 2003 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the perfect set up for a kissing moment!!!!
Darn it!!!!!!
NO FAIR!!!! why do people torture me so?!?!?!
well anyway PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!
and sango pet cat is actually called Kilala not kirara.
but don't worry a lot of people make that mistake. ^_~
and whan I mean a lot I mean a lot!
PLEASE POAT SOOON! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Mizu Tenshi On: February 14, 2003 13:13 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good! I can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: danille On: February 14, 2003 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated it because i thought it was good but the reasoni gave the enjoyment factor a 6 was because there was only one chapter stupid yes but i like a story to come out with 2 chapters but you don't have to listin to me i thought it was good oh and if you want more people to see your story and review you should go to www.fanfiction.net, and if you consider it e-mail me at buttercup124109@uahoo.com my pen name at fanfiction is danille and i am the author of 2 stories. is this love real love? and it's not a fairy tale anymore. i thought your story was very good and original. |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 14, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this is going where I thinks it's going this fic
is probably going to have a sad ending not unless
some miracle happens. ~_~
please continue I need to see where the story leads?!?!? |
