Reviewed By: Zowe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2002 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pretty good job. I think that you should have given more detail. How did Trent/Heero survive his illness? And just how sick was he? You proabley should have explained those points better, becuase then it would be easier to understand why his mother just left him. Also, how did he come to be in the school? Overall, I think you did good. I like the idea of trying to explain Heero past you just seemed to forget some important deatils when is all. |
