| "Everlong" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: chungie On: August 08, 2005 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must update soon!!! LIke I said before it's sooo good. THere's just enough of everything! Each of the characters are in character and man... this is pretty amazing. WHen do you post the next chapter? Weekly?
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Reviewed By: chungie On: August 08, 2005 20:38 CDT
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Hail to your work!!! maybe this is just getting annoying or sumthing but I can't help but praise your work. It's just so good and it makes readers feel what's happening!
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Reviewed By: chungie On: August 08, 2005 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greek Mythology is soo interesting. ^^
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Reviewed By: chungie On: August 08, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CHapter two was awesome! Loved the way they felt around each other. Smiled when they fought lol. ^^ Brilliant!
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Reviewed By: chungie On: August 08, 2005 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is sooo good!!! Very talented indeed. I like your kagome perspective. keep it up!
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Title: ch7
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 21:50 CDT
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go tree huggers! uh...i mean, i like how u show the change in perspective! also, ur writing, description and characterisation are really good. besides that, i think u hav a few errors, one towards the end, the other(s) near the end. anyway, i look fwd to the next chapter! ja!
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Reviewed By: Me On: September 05, 2004 11:02 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 04:12 CDT
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loved it update again soon |
Reviewed By: Tink* On: April 18, 2003 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story, its great. At first I didn't really think i would be into it because i usually only read way off the wall fantasy, but i gave it a shot anyway because of the title. Yes i believe that you can judge a book by its cover. If the title is boring why bother? Actually i wasn't going to read this but the little nagging voice kept pestering me so i had to come back. Well anyway, this story was great, very well developed. The character were not just one-dimonsional and the flash backs were cool (I really liked the cute little stories!) Also the writing style was good. Please continue to work on this fanfic (Glare) You are pretty dang talented *_* |
Reviewed By: aNimE fAn On: March 04, 2003 20:13 CST
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Wow... man you have to finish this! I love it so far. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!! *i can't wait till you post an update!* |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is the only intelagent fic I have ever read, this can't be done there is more right, you can't leave it like this |
Reviewed By: hiya On: February 23, 2003 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That Artemis story is a really good foreshadower, you gonna make use with it? I hope not because that would be sad; kagome killing Inu Yasha. :( boohoo. Anywayz, great story, keep it up! |
Reviewed By: giggles On: February 20, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its interesting ! kinda confusing in some parts .........please keep writing ! |
Reviewed By: Demonchic_K On: February 19, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!!! This is a very interesting fic and i cant wait for more |
Reviewed By: Bishiglomper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooohhh... this gonna get intresting....i liked this story ^_^ update soon! |
