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| "Falling for the Little Emperor" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Tenshi of Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Recently, the thought of Ash and Gary trailed into my head at school. It was wonderful. New yaoi always appeals to me. So I've been looking for it (and any other Pokemon yaoi or fic that jumps out at me). Unfortunately, mediaminer contains mostly Ash and Misty. And I must say, out of all the pokemon yaoi (or even shounen-ai) that I have found, this is by far the best. It made me so happy that I signed in to review. And usually, if the author requires me to sign in, I don't. =] This was brilliant, however. Because even when I did find a readable yaoi pokemon, there would be no or horrid sex scenes. I was just mentioning earlier today that I totally skip sex scenes if they aren't good. I've found a few on here, but this fic is the only one I've read completely through. =] I am so pleased to have found this fiction. Thank you for sharing it. I love hearing of new pairings. I did find a Brock and James fic, but the writing was crap...well, maybe I'm being harsh. Still, it wasn't all that great compared to what I'm used to reading. I loved this fic. Bravo! Congratulations!! I loved it so much. haha, James's blue undies. Love that. They were blue, right? *lets whole uptight official bithy-has-to-have-good-writing facade go and squeals like a fangirl* I love the whole concept!! hee! Sex was great! *jumps up and down* I want a sequal!!!!! And James won't say Butch's name!! =D *fixes glasses and regains composure* I mean.. ahem... the whole concept... yeah. Very...appealing. And Butch wetting James crotch through the fabric...and running his fingers under the band...of course, there's room for improvement...but all very good in the end. =D haha! *glomp* I'm going split personality on ya! but oh well!! You've put me in a good mood!! WHATEVER! I was before!! But this helped more!! =D Now... I hope I returned the favor in the review. It was much longer than expected and I'm being rushed. o.o
| Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 23:04 CDT
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I normally wouldn't be caught dead reading a pokemon fic, however, I enjoy some of your others so I took a chance. I can actually hear James' voice. It's just so cute. I had to go looking for this because I needed to read it again. Thank you for writing -El-
| Reviewed By: Silent Cherub [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 06:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Well done! It was very pleasant to read and cute too. Especially James. :)
| Reviewed By: Zack On: February 25, 2003 11:45 CST
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cool ending ^-^ |
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