Reviewed By: raccly er 17 On: June 29, 2005 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great start! And The Trunks and Bra parts are cute too! Not to forget that I luv your humor! It's soooo funny!! Well, are you planing on up-dating? I hope your not leting a few less reivews slow ya down! I didn't, heck, I barly get ANY reivews!!! And, as a sugesetion, and a qestion, I have a feeling Bra and Trunks are ganna burn the chicken, or better yet, cach the house, and/or kitchen on fire! lol! Well, up-date soon!! -raccly er 17 ,raccly_er@yahoo.com.
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